Open Poetry #10 |
Bedroom of My Eyes |
Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Let me torture you in the bedroom of my eyes Can you guess what I am thinking? as reflections whisper words of art Does the whirlpool of baby blues send sweet thoughts to only you? in the moonlight from the bedroom of my eyes I look at you and glance away wondering what it would be like to make love with you Is your manhood drowning in my lust? as words of art invite you into the bedroom of my eyes A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*wow* image of a torture in the bedroom of your eyes,.....superb....loved it. full of promises for your lucky man Charisma |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
haa ..any lucky men out there?..thank you Charisma glad you enjoyed.. A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"In the moonlight from the bedroom of my eyes I look at you and glance away wondering what it would be like to make love with you." "Is your manhood drowning in my lust?" Victoria you certainly know how to say the right words to get a mans attention...very nice words...softly romantic...James |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Well, youre too kind James..im glad you thought it romantic..thank you for peeking in today.. A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
I look at you and glance away wondering what it would be like Victoria, sultry and alluring...with a spice of mystery. Robert Joseph |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Robert..I am pleased you enjoyed my poem..free verse is harder for me to write but this one came quite naturally. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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