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A Rose Haiku |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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 the scent is yours, breath deeply love this rose as yours [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 10-12-2000).] |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
I like it! Elizabeth Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near... hedeservesbetter@hotmail.com |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Very lovely indeed Sunshine..  A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Beautiful, serene and well-written...good job! Nathan |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
The rose of today promises days of morrow as bloom is set forth Hope you don't mind me borrow "BACK" my roses LOL.....lovely Haiku!! [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 10-12-2000).] |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Breathtaking haiku like that of the rose! Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
 fragrance of the rose sets lonely spirit dreaming searching for loves bloom ~vlraynes Sunshine- Very beautiful haiku. I like it lots. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I have no flowers to bring Just words of thanks This speaks to the heart Where all roses bloom. . . Excellent my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
The blooming rose graphics pale to the beauty of the writing....beautiful work~ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful! Denise |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you everyone, for reading... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Nice Haiku!!!!likied it!!!!!!! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you Vandana... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Toddles Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 396New Orleans, Louisiana |
Very Nice!!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ Gossssssshhhh ! It was my birthday - and I missed my roses ???? Darn that FTD man ! This is one lovely post with lots of little roses not far behind. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Sunshine-- as always your work is beautiful. wonderfully written haiku you have here. and as i've told you before... I admire anyone who can write one of these and do so with your grace and beauty. take care. amy |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Toddles, Marge, Amy...since Haikus are the day's delight, thought I'd go ahead and respond and bring this back up... thank you all... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Sunshine ~ As usual you have left me with rosy cheeks. Don't know if it's a sunburn or how your verse embarasses my poor attempts. Really, they are rosy due to my smiles after reading you. PS - I took the challenge. Hope they are not too boring(;-) Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Too beautiful to let slip so far. BTTT |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
sunshine, i like the way you incorporate the human element into your haiku makes an interesting read  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Interloper...from whom do you ask lessons?...{~,^}...thank you... Kaile [which I believe, should rhyme with Haley..?] thank you for taking the time to read a poem [Haiku] most special to me... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
great, did you hear everythings coming up roses. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Rosebud, a fitting comment from a lovely person... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Excellent haiku, I enjoyed it. Velvet perfection, Framed with verdant majesty, Dew sprinkled perfume. Cant decide if this is about you or the rose. Regards Olias |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
beautiful.....so beautiful.....love it thoroughly....excellent haiku.. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
for you lives this rose the scent is yours, breath deeply love this rose as yours So beautiful sunshine....a very lovely read Tracie~ < !signature--> Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe [This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 11-18-2000).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Olias, I am more like a carnation...but thank you for reading... Thank you Charisma, it likes me, too... Thank you Tracie...! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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