Open Poetry #10 |
Haiku |
Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Lily, bend thy head ‘neath arctic breath doth thee lie to spring come spring soon Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Just wonderful my friend. . . Spring will be here before you know it. . . --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Spotted grace so pure tilted head of peaceful soul in petals serene |
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natelan Junior Member
since 2000-10-06
Posts 34Escondido, CA, USA |
*bows* Sun- The way you placed these words together so wounderfully, caused this poem to bounce softly on my tongue in a way that actually fills me with cheer. Wonderful, wonderful. *bows* Nathan |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sven, my constant reader, I am running out of ways to say thank you... Mark, your Haikus always outshine mine, thank you... natelan, a hearty WELCOME to Passions! Thank you for sharing your comments with me... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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