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Open Poetry #10

Tiny Tears Are Falling

Kitty**
Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 428
Charlottesville,VA USA

0 posted 2000-10-12 08:01 AM

*T*  Tonight I feel so lonely.
*I*  Inside I feel so blue.
*N*  Never will I have you.
*Y*  Yearning is all I do.
*T*  Touching on a memory.
*E*  Each time I hear your name.
*A*  Always there to remind me.
*R*  Rapture was my gain.
*S*  Since you've been gone,
*A*  Agony is mine.
*R*  Recalling memories are
*E*  Echos of a bygone time.
*F*  For ever I will love you.
*A*  And tuck your memory away.
*L*  Loosing you was hell on earth.
*L*  Lasting for ever and a day.
*I*  In my heart you'll always be.
*N*  Nothing more to say for me.
*G*  Goodby my Love, goodby.****


If you can't make it so,
you need to let it go!

Butterflies_dont_cry
Member Elite

since 2000-03-06

Posts 3733
Michigan

1 posted 2000-10-12 08:07 AM

Kitty* This is written with excellent care
and thought...it shows and pulls at the
heartstrings. Beautiful work~

Kitty**
Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 428
Charlottesville,VA USA

2 posted 2000-10-12 08:17 AM

Butterflies_dont_cry
Thank you..
Ahhhhh, what I'd give to have 'YOUR' talent.

Hugs,
Kitty

If you can't make it so,
you need to let it go!

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

3 posted 2000-10-12 08:25 AM

ahh an acrostic, written beautifully

enjoyed it muchly

Maree

"If my words could blanket the skies
and fill every corner and crevice of
this earth, still this won't be enough"
"Maree Russo"

Robert Joseph
Member

since 2000-10-07

Posts 491
South Carolina

4 posted 2000-10-12 08:26 AM

Kitty, I'm a great fan of ''the blues'' and this piece certainly spells them out. Nicely done.

Robert Joseph

Kitty**
Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 428
Charlottesville,VA USA

5 posted 2000-10-12 08:31 AM

Dark Angel...So pleased you enjoyed!! ;-)

Robert Joseph...I'm a fan of 'the Blues' too!
It surely reflexs in my writings..
Thanks for reading!

Kitty

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