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Eloise
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since 1999-11-27
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Wyoming

0 posted 2000-10-11 10:35 PM


Recall to mind old memories
Of the ghosts of seasons past.
Connect those thoughts so I can see
The visions we had cast.

As these shadows come to call,
The spirits rise and dance.
The echoes fill the halls
And I get another glance.

As I follow this path of memories,
Still there within the haze.
Back into past journeys
We travel through the maze.

There among the hurt and pain
Feeling safe from harm.
Not all visions turn to rain.
Many bring with them their charm.

© Copyright 2000 Eloise - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 2000-10-11 10:51 PM


The charm is interlaced and woven throughout...this is lovely Eloise! So nice to see you here again!

Denise

[This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 10-11-2000).]

Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136
Mobile, AL
2 posted 2000-10-11 11:20 PM


Lovely..yes..I liked this one. It has a familiar feeling in it for me.   Nice work!

Gemini
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since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203
Wisconsin, USA
3 posted 2000-10-11 11:25 PM


Eloise-This was beautiful.
Eloise
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since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096
Wyoming
4 posted 2000-10-12 08:50 AM


Thank you Denise.  It's been awhile, but I always do come back.  
Temptress and Gemini, thank you both so much as well.  

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