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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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Islands of wildflowers carpet the meadows japanese bloodgrass..bleeding with hue the fog in the morn curtseys to the sun painting the skies, cobalt blue taste of honey dew fresh upon moist lips succulent as her lover in the night savoring each bite of honey dew melon as her lover savored her in moonlight french vanilla coffee filled to the brim steamy as her shower..sharing with him her tongue gently stirs within the cup thinking of his words.."honey ease up" Islands of wildflowers carpet the meadows she ravishes her coffee.. and then swallows A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Victoria~ All I can say is "ouch" you are on fire here!!! Very hot.  -SEA |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Victoria, sometimes I read other poets work here and think "why can't I write like that?" This is one of those times. Your choice of words and the images you convey amaze me. Thank you for posting this one, I really enjoyed it. Dee |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Whooieeeee! Sizzling! Corinne |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
ha ha..Glad you enjoyed Sea.  |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Well you just have to pretend Dee..that french vanilla coffee does it to me everytime haa... < !signature-->A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 10-11-2000).] |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you Corinne...nice to hear from you A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This poem is...ah let me see I want to use the right word...oh I found it within your own words...succulent...yes that word describes this poem perfectly...James |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Succulent coffee it is haa..thank you James..glad you enjoyed..the coffee that is haa.. A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautifully done, Victoria! Denise |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you so much Denise..glad you enjoyed.. A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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