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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2000-10-10 11:11 PM


Masturbated--maddingly--
mumbled moan of monotone...
a simple sigh so sad to me--
my spirit sighs in search of home.
A moment--GOLDEN--me, alone
(glimpse of eyes in search of free)
falling...elasticity...
Anything, to call my own.
A grasp of straw in break of back--
oases, shimmer in the sand...
foot-fall of the camel's trek--
in quench of thirst of all I lack.
Depart! The path of caravan!
Release these chains of love's regret.

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Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
1 posted 2000-10-10 11:52 PM


Well this one sure isn't lacking at all.  Where there is the knowledge of what you see as your weaknesses there is also the first step in coming to grips and dealing with it and not waivering to the temptations as much.  You will find it in you if you look deep enough my friend.  I KNOW you will.  You are in there somewhere...just keep knocking on those internal doors and you will find you.
spiked
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since 2000-01-13
Posts 873
Hammond, La USA
2 posted 2000-10-11 12:56 PM


VEEEERY Spicy Serenity. Well done my little pepper.
Rich

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

3 posted 2000-10-11 01:50 AM


my spirit sighs in search of home.
A moment--GOLDEN--me, alone
(glimpse of eyes in search of free)
falling...elasticity...
Anything, to call my own.
====================

Ummmm .... so ... why didnt ya just post
my picture here...
cause ya KNOW ya hung a MIRROR!!!!!!
*sigh* ...
can i just say....I KNOW....
and then you will know ...
me loves ya
me

wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22
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TEXAS (it's all big)
4 posted 2000-10-11 12:55 PM


this was very good miss sen
serenity blaze
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5 posted 2000-10-12 04:04 AM


Thank you much...and JM---I knew that I could count on you to get the allegory of the imagery....not laughing out loud...oh no.

It is a futile thing to attempt a relationship on your own....

Love ya muchly, all...and thank you.

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