Open Poetry #10 |
Love Me Tonight |
SEA
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since 2000-01-18
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Time to slow down I'm in need of repair my heart is aching my soul in despair So sad I've been and I'm in need of touch Love me tonight I want you so much Say all the things you know I need to hear let your mouth linger....... I have no fear Place those kisses where they need to be I want your hands to become a part of me Over & over touch me in places different or same bring to my lips a ~SIGH~ .....the whisper of your name Oh how I love you hold me close as we let go a welcome release of emotion overflow. -SEA- |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Sea, this is so beautiful. Dee |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Sea this is a magical poem, I really like this. Marsha |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I will hold you in my arms kiss you till the tears run dry I will give to you all my charms just to hear one more little "sigh" |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
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Dee~ thank you. Marsha~ I don't think I've had a poem be called magical before, thank you, that made me smile. Mark~.........*SIGH*............ just what I needed....... -SEA |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*sigh* ....love is sooooo beautiful... Charisma |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
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Charisma~ yes,love is, now if my husband would just get home............. -SEA |
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just_another_fe Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483MICHIGAN |
this was very beautiful....n i want it toooooooo *pouts like a lil kid* .......like marks lil comment very cute |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Whoa....steamy piece SEA great writings....wonderful first read for me tonight...I don't think it'll get any better than this Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"Let your mouth linger.. I have no fear." My style of kissing...let it linger..James |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Girl ... you're sizzling here ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Simply lovely SEA - Just beautiful!!! Bonnie |
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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
Absolutely beautifull. I can only wish for the same for myself. I liked this alot Keith Mullin Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you. |
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SEA
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J_A_F~ Thanks! Tracie~ Steamy is good....thanks much James~ Mine too! Marge~ Thank you! Bonnie~ Thank you for reading Keith~ I'm glad you liked this -SEA |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
SEA, desire painted nicely in the brushstrokes of your words. Robert Joseph |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I am in need of more "sigh"s So I came by to once more say I will take soaring in heaven's skies As once more we begin our play Rest you atop a moonbeam's trail Caress you with a feather's touch Breezes of lust filling your sail Passionately holding you in my clutch ....Well if he is the jealous type then I would say DON'T invite him to read your poetry.LOL..... |
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SEA
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RJ~ thank you very much! Mark~ sweetheart, he has me, so he can't be too jealous......besides, he gets all the lovin's -SEA |
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natelan Junior Member
since 2000-10-06
Posts 34Escondido, CA, USA |
*bows* This is gorgeous! ... o O (And leaves much to the imagination, hehehe) *winks* *bows* A man in a bubble is a man in trouble. |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Well - besides getting a taste of the sensual SEA - and a wonderful taste at that! - I learned how Mark ran his count up over 3000 - he replies to the good ones at least twice! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Wellllll maybe not ALL the lovin!!!!! Not when you are on the range he don't LOL....Thank you for allowing me to play my friend. Sometimes this cowboy needs his spurs spun a little. HUGS TO YA Wilfred....only once in awhile but mostly it is called NO SLEEP!!LOL |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
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Natelan~ thanks WY~ Sensual SEA, oh yes, I like that....Sensual Susan......yep, that works!! thank you. Mark~ ok, so maybe not ALL.... you have definately stole a corner of my heart. -SEA |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
6' 2 1/2"....enough? GOOD.....thought so !!!! and yes a size 12 boot |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
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Mark~ Ok, that is very tall....my Dad is that tall. Size 12?!? -SEA |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Tom Jones couldn't have said it better, this is fabulous! (If you don't know who he is, I'm really showing my age here Kathleen |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
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Irish Rose~ Yes, I know Tom Jones......I guess that's dating myself, but so what, I love his voice....thanks for stopping in to read. -SEA |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Darlin girl what a sensual delight...I am so glad I had the chance to go find this |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I do like this one, great work! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
enjoyed this work of art SEA including all the comments that followed ~~softly smiling Maureen |
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