Open Poetry #7 |
Looking into my Sweethearts Eyes |
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Looking into my Sweethearts Eyes As for my love life I have no success stories to tell. Too many failed relationships and heartbreaks have not served who I am so well. I can only have hope that in the future I will have stories of love and laughter to share and I will send them out with all my love to all those who truly care. But wait...Something good happened just last night. I'm pretty sure I saw the beginning of love in my sweethearts precious eyes. At first she almost made me cry cause she said she didn't trust me and she wanted to look me right in my eyes. But I had a logical explanation and as I spilled out my heart her eyes seemed to say...give me your love...don't go away. Each and every look from her eyes that night was wanted and needed and filled me with delight. Yes these are the looks I have so deeply desired. And the eyes that are setting my once lonely heart on fire. I had so much fun in my sweethearts care... with her sweetness and my pleasure we made quite a lovely pair. And everytime I looked into her eyes it gave me new hope that love still survives. It seemed as if her eyes were saying give me some of that love that I feel and I knew that my eyes were saying...you better believe that I will. No doubt all these feelings of pleasure will soon be wonderful memories for me and my love to treasure. I Love your eyes Lena. Jameslee@April30,2000 [This message has been edited by jmlee12345 (edited 05-07-2000).] |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
James~ This is so sweet I hope you have shown this to her cause I'm sure she would love to read it and know that thats how you feel Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Such hope and desire! I truly believe there are no failures in love ... only lessons and more adventures. What a delightful verse. /Kit McCallum |
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Tess Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 288Australia |
Nothing like looking into the eyes of someone and seeing the love reflected there. These were beautiful thoughts, from a poem that started on a seemingly negative point. Thanks for sharing this with us "Love is the only drug you can take that will convince you each time that you've never had it before." ~author unknown~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Tracie, Kit, and Tess for reading and your wonderful comments. Lena will see this soon...I have been sharing poetry with her for awhile...so right...there is nothing like looking into the eyes of love. James |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
With a these wonderful poems you write about Lena, I can't believe she hasn't fallen straight into your arms forever. Marina |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
Congratulations James! I truly hope things work out between you and Lena...Lord knows, you deserve it. Alicat |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thanks Marina...I think it is happening...we can never escape the need for both hearts to have the same feelings and at the same time. Thanks Alicat that makes two of us and I hope she feels the same way about me. James |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I spent a little time with Lena last night and it was fun...we talked stories and sang Karaoke. I reread this poem and decided to retitle it "Looking into my Sweethearts Eyes." So not a new poem...just a new title. James |
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lorilockheart Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 206Alabama |
James, I love the last line. Those few words are amazingly powerful, and they just melted my heart. Any woman wants to hear that. Please share this with her. Lori |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Lori...I appreciate your melted heart and I promise Lena will get a copy of this. I have given her lots of my poems and especially she will get this one because it was written only for her. I told her the other night that she was the most beautiful woman on this whole island...do you think I like her? I'm putting all my poems together in a book or folder with pictures and everything...I have about 80 poems and Lena will get a copy of that soon. James |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I saw Lena about a month ago...after not seeing her for at least a year...she always looks exactly the same...James |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
Such a touching work, from the sadness, to the feeling of loves hope, so much can be found with in the eyes of the one you need, love, adore, as my signature proclaims, I enjoyed this work so very much, thank you for sharing it. Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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