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Open Poetry #7
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jkm1
Junior Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 11
0 posted 2000-05-01 12:17 PM

Let`s stand forever in this place
Revel in this bliss
This near perfection
I know does not exist
I`ll tell you everything you want to know
I`ll listen to all you have to say
Just let me bask in this sweet warmth
The promise of something more
Forever
A figment of my imagination
An actor in my dreams
A companion for my soul
A fantasy of the heart
Never to be disappointed

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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
1 posted 2000-05-01 01:08 AM

A merry May Day welcome to you!  and I do so love the sweet promises implied here--very, very nice work...
Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
2 posted 2000-05-01 05:32 PM

Hi jkm1,

To who you are speeking they will be loved deeply, Very beautifully written, thank you for sharing it.

Cerenity
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