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Worth What?
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Worth What? |
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winterinblue Junior Member
since 1999-12-29
Posts 32 |
I’ve never been able to write about the back of the dark garage; where innocence free was stolen from me. How I wish it had been a mirage. I’ve never been able to live again with a feeling of worth inside. It’s been thirty-one years since I shed those tears; while a tender part of me died. A violet hollow beneath the willow weeps its fragrance still ... |
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DiObear Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 66Switzerland |
This poem touched me. I read it a few times and wish it had been longer. Seems like you probably have more you could say. Maybe your innocence was taken, but I hope your poetry helps you see your worth! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
WinterInBlue~ Now that you've written about it .. perhaps you can get past it. You have worth, hon. Trust me .. you have great worth. Winter is over ... Spring forth with blossoms of new. *HUGS* to you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
It's a good work... but it sure does leave me wordless. Hope time has worked a few miracles for you. |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Short sweet, and to the point! NO ONE can take your worth away NO ONE. You are you, and each experience we deal with in life ----makes us stronger and wiser BUT never worthless! I once wrote a poem so short which is amazing for wordy me --- "Sometimes I feel like a boxspring mattress." Thanks for sharing this very well done poem. If it is about you, brush yourself off, and move on. If it was written for a friend - reach out and lend a hand. If it was written from imagination --------message well received. netswan |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Many people here know the pain of which you speak. If this is about you, know you are not alone. Writing helps release the denons of our past. Believe me I know. All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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tincan5 Junior Member
since 2000-04-25
Posts 33 |
Very moving piece you've written. I hope you never forget that your life does count for something, that it has much value and purpose! Wishing you much inner peace and happiness  |
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A.C.Turner Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 83Reading, Pa.Home of Bardfest |
Grabbed my heart. Very touching, yet disturbing. ACT. |
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