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jkm1 Junior Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 11 |
Years, weeks, days Hours, minutes, seconds A lifetime spent Waiting, Words on a page A time, a place, a family Strangers to the mind Love, loss, promise A tragic story, I linger on your words Searching for answers Greeted by ambivalence Word, syllable, breath Your last, Seems too soon A presence just discovered Alone again Ink, paper, images Once yours, Now mine, Proof of what I lost Evidence of undying love? As I sit, Emotions elude me Voice fails me Body shakes Tears flow Wondering what it all means |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! I enjoyed this greatly though it is quite sad...please check your email for a special message.  |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
Welcome to passions... this is, appropriately, a very passionate piece... moving and emotional. Thanks for the read. I'll look forward to reading more of your work. |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
Whoa...been there, my friend. Very moving, maudlin poem. Welcome to Passions, and I hope you continue to share with us.  *nudge* Psssst....take a look at the I Am challenge....and let us know a bit more about ya.  Alicat |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Welcome to passions....Quite impressed by this piece...I hope to see more of your very soon. All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JKM~ Welcome to the family of Passionate Poets. Hope you enjoy your stay. Enjoyed your first post. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Love, loss, promise A tragic story, I linger on your words Searching for answers Greeted by ambivalence Word, syllable, breath Your last, Seems too soon A presence just discovered Alone again Ink, paper, images Once yours, Now mine, Proof of what I lost Evidence of undying love? ------------ This is VERY well written and expressed. this is an emotion filled piece... and makes a very nice first impression. I look forward to more of your work. I like this style of poetry. WELCOME to passions...nice to meet you! ~as always, Take Care,JM~ -------------- I know it's been a long road To get these towns behind me and I Will gladly reap what we may sow-- I am there for you ... and you're there for me ... Are you waiting for Heart in hand Woman and man See me where I stand I am Heart Heart in hand ~vertical horizon~ |
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Craig Member
since 1999-06-10
Posts 444 |
Hello jkm1 Welcome to Passions, I enjoyed the read. BTW- Are there lots of students in Ithaca that can write like this?  Yes, I admit your general rule. That every poet is a fool: But I myself may serve to show it. That every fool is not a poet. |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Welcome to Passions jmk1 - And, such a heartfelt passionate poem to start out with. Thanks for sharing netswan |
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A.C.Turner Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 83Reading, Pa.Home of Bardfest |
Really emotional. Choked me up a bit. Peace to you. ACT. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi jkm1, Wonderful to have you here my friend, this poem is very touching, a beautiful first post, hope to be able to enjoy more of your work. WELCOME TO PASSIONS Cerenity |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions, jkm! Very moving, emotional piece of writing! Denise |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
interesting |
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