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~ WITCH POEM ~ ...( repost ) ... ( by 9 year old Jennifer )
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~ WITCH POEM ~ ...( repost ) ... ( by 9 year old Jennifer ) |
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mini poet Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 56Canada 
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WITCH POEM ~~~  One dark and scary night I crept outside to a fresh moon light I should'nt have gone It was very dark I thought I saw a witch but that was just the start The witch swooped down and tied me to her broom I tried to get free but what for I'm doomed She took me to her castle it gave me quite a scare Okay it was so scary that I nearly lost my hair She grabbed me by the arm and took me to her room She chained me to her table and left me with her broom I looked around the bedroom and then I saw a tool I don't know what its called but it looked pretty cool It was laying right beside me so I grabbed it in my hand I used it on the chains and they broke now ain't that grand I jumped down off the table and took the broom with me I said some magic words and out the window Weeeeeeeeee Past the houses moon and stars and home to bed where I dream of chocolate bars ~~~ [This message has been edited by mini poet (edited 04-30-2000).] |
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AliciaRose New Member
since 2000-04-29
Posts 8 |
I like your poem very much! It was very nice, I look forward too your poems.  |
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Brandyn Sand Member
since 2000-04-21
Posts 82Columbia, SC |
Very cute poem! *the mouse was a real nice touch* LOL Thanx for the smile. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jenni~Mini~  I like your repost .. it's so much fun to be ten and be silly. Looks like somebody moved that mouse's cheese ! Could it have been Dad ? Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
This is wonderful, Miss Jennifer! AliciaRose showed it to me and asked me to read it. You are a very talented young lady! Please keep writing. Alicia and I would like to read more! |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
~jen this was a darling poem. it had me giggling and laughing all the way through. but i also must say that it was very good! great job!! amy ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mini poet, Enjoyed the read, very cute. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Cute poem! Looks like that mouse saw my cat!  |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is a great poem, Jennifer!! I also laughed all the way through, I love a poem that gives me so much fun! Thanks for sharing this one! Keep posting those poems! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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