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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho 
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Striking. I am sorry for your loss, but you were able to tell a story that will touch many hearts. Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
This is a stark and heartrending poem. I am so sorry for your loss. I know how much you loved your mother, and I know how much she loved you. |
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Lone Ranger Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 92Salvador , Bahia , Brazil |
Another heartbreaking poem by lucky... Great work man , and I'm sorry for your loss I think I have an idea of how it must feel to lose your mother... Great poem! "Only in the dreams , is that man can truly be free It was always thus and always thus will be" Prof. Keating Dead Poets Society |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
It took months before I could ever write of it. It's now been almost 3 yrs, as you can see. My playing of music far surpasses my ability to write poetry as it came from my mother long before I began to think of writing. I've only been able to play and sing a couple of times since then, and then only with tears in my eyes. It's mom's birthday (april 29th) and I lost my baby this very same month. It shall ever be a month I can't forget. Thank you so much Sunshine, I know where your heart is. RJ sends love and prayers as you know. Ranger, lots of prayers to you and all of yours I see your words and they jump off the paper at me, such emotion. such heart. Thank you from Rosemary (she went to the store) and thank you so much from myself. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lucky~ I cry the tears of having lost my mother only 4 1/2 years ago ... you touch me with your words. Love to you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Marge you've got so much heart. I'm so glad you see through all my silly faces. If you must know that's my mom leaving all her traces... do you know what I should do..? [This message has been edited by lucky (edited 04-19-2000).] |
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winterinblue Junior Member
since 1999-12-29
Posts 32 |
This is really, really sad. It reminds me of when my grandmother died. |
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