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Ray of Hope
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Ray of Hope |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
I can see the end in sight soon there will be light instead of darkness all around a ray of hope will be found think we could be friends may help as hearts mend please consider my request as you decide what's best Let's put an end to this conflict no need for either of us to restrict what will happen tomorrow that would only bring more sorrow i think there's been enough makes it awful rough to sort out how I really feel distinguish what is real Just need some time to think you've pushed me to the brink standing on the edge of the world's highest ledge have to be careful or I will fall no one here to call will you throw me a rope offering up a ray of hope Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Words to live by, Love Wolf. Well done! Corinne |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Ah, an indrawn breath! - I have been there. Only an excellent poet could take me back on that train to that station. Congratulations. |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
netswan throws a rope and giggles mischievously about the what the future will bring.--- A ray of hope for you, Lone Wolf. Wonderful poem-- it is glittering with hope. netswan |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Corinne....thanks!!! I try!!!! Rosemary....sorry you have been there. Thanks for going back with me. netswan....thank you for the rope, my friend. I know there will be a ray of hope for me. Glad the hope shows through. I will let you know!!  Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
A ray of hope indeed, I see this in you. Know that things will get better. All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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A.C.Turner Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 83Reading, Pa.Home of Bardfest |
Beautifully executed. Positivity is the breath of the future. Peace to you. ACT. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Jeffrey, Yes I do have a ray of hope left thanks to some wonderful friends. I know it will get better in time. Thanks!! Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
AC, How did you sneak in there?? Welcome to Passions!!! Thank you, I do try to stay positive. Not easy lately, but I have to try. Looking forward to seeing some of your work. Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Hope is all that we have some days LW. . . who knows? You may get that ray yet. . . Excellent poem. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sven, Hope is all I have most days. I really do hope I get that ray....too much shared for it to be denied I think. It is not up to me. All I can to is offer....he has to accept. Thank you... Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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DiObear Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 66Switzerland |
Great way of looking at a tough situation. Sometimes we all need a reminder that there's hope. DiObear (By the way, I love the song by Michael W. Smith that you quote in your signature.) |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
You have a good attitude in a tough situation..and you have written a really good poem! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Life holds back its mysteries, Man keeps back his emotions hidden, Offer a rope of hope to one, Soon he will be a friendly one... A great poem Lone Wolf, you should not be lone wolf anymore, I wish to part of a pack of wolves now on.... Regards, sudhir Take each day as it comes, Consider each day as a flight, Try hard to succeed and fly, Surely then you will reach some height. But if by some chance you don’t, Remember that tomorrow will always come. Learn this well and learn this hard That today’s efforts will pay for tomorrow’s fun. A Crazy Monster, a.k.a Ski |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
DiOBear....thank you, I try to stay positive and look for the hope......I know it is there. BTW.....that is my favorite song!! Martie....thank you, not always easy. sudhir....thank you very much....would be an honor to have you join the pack!!! Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Lone Wolf, You said this perfectly my friend, beautiful words here, I wish for you HOPE floating on the wind your direction. Cerenity |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Cerenity_1, Thank you, my friend for the sweet wishes!! Very nice of you. Thanks for the HOPE!! LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Beautifully written. There is always a little ray of hope soon to be warming your heart.Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sun here...throwing rope, string, yarn, all wrapped up in memories of hope...never give that up...it gets us through our worst moments... |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
A Ray of Hope is always there trusting yourself is the key another waits to take your hand and carve a true love destiny ~~~~~~ nice writing Lone Wolf remember, it's always darkest before the dawn. A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
tracie...thank you...I hope there is!! Sun...I got the rope, string, and yarn...thanks. Yes, it does see us through. Danny...hi there!! Nice stanza you wrote there...touching and full of hope....thank you!!! I will try to remember... LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Tia Junior Member
since 2000-05-05
Posts 41massachusetts |
that was a wonderful poem...thanks for reminding me how much hope is needed in a tough time... |
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Zelda Junior Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 43NOVA |
A ray of hope and a friend to lend the rope...hmm...think that didn't come out right...  Your thoughts are expressed very well in this--nice sentiments they are. Z |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
tia...thank you for the reply and you are welcome for the reminder. Zelda...hhmmmmmm, not sure if it did or not. But thanks anyway!!!! Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Lone your my friend and I will always share my rays of hope with you whenever you need them..all you have to do is ICQ me!... I felt your heart in this piece! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LoneWolf~ You already know how I feel about HOPE ... it's ALWAYS there ... glad to see you're thinking positive thoughts. Great writing from your heart. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
RH, Glad to have you as my friend!!! Thank you for sharing your rays of hope!! Will do on the ICQ....yes, my heart is right there... Marge, Yes, I know the hope is ALWAYS there and I do my best to stay positive about things. Thank you and it always comes from the heart!! Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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