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Open Poetry #7

Sweet Smiles of Sadness

sKiTtLeS
Member

since 2000-04-12

Posts 113
wisconsin, u.s.a.

0 posted 2000-04-16 08:19 PM

Memories come flooding back to implant in my brain, and haunt me, as I see you walk into the room.

Wanting you to turn around,
wanting you to hold me.

I see a sad smile, a sweet smile, glittering behind your eyes when you glance my way.

Do you think of me?

I wish we hadn't started this game, this game that turned deadly to our hearts.

This game which left me with pieces of you.

Hidden smiles of sadness.

Glittering behind eyes.

Hesitant to look my way.

"Don't cry because it's over, smile because it happened."
-the words of a friend

doreen peri
Member Elite

since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

1 posted 2000-04-16 08:33 PM

"Hidden smiles of sadness.
Glittering behind eyes."

My favorite lines.... well done! Enjoyed!

Alicat
Member Elite

since 1999-05-23

Posts 4094
Coastal Texas

2 posted 2000-04-16 08:46 PM

Poignant melancholy, and bittersweet regret...beautiful in its maudlin ausperity.

Keep sending more, and never stop writing.

Alicat

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2000-04-16 09:22 PM

sKiTtLeS~
I enjoyed this.
Hope is just a glance away.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Lost Dreamer
Member Elite

since 1999-06-20

Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

4 posted 2000-04-16 10:48 PM

Hopefully in time all will be healed for you, nice poem.

lucky
Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 1601
Idaho

5 posted 2000-04-18 03:35 PM

I like sweet smiles no matter what the case. Good feelings here.

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