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Open Poetry #7

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BlueEyez666
New Member

since 2000-04-28

Posts 9

0 posted 2000-04-28 12:41 PM

Winter comes and goes
Just like the love
You said you felt for me
The bitter cold wind
Whips around my body
The old sinks into me
Just like the hurt I felt
When you called that night
Said we shouldn't see each other anymore
I didn't understand why
The tears came rusing down my face
Like the love letter I threw to the wind
I was hurt and crying
But you didn't care,
For my young foolish heart
I fell deep in love
But you rushed right out of it
You broke my heart
On the cold winter night
The cold, icy breeze
Wrapped around my heat
To never let you back in.

Jeffrey Carter

Member Elite

since 2000-04-08

Posts 2367
State of constant confusion!

1 posted 2000-04-28 03:58 PM

I can feel your pain in this .
Know that a broken heart heals in time.
Beautifully written.
Welcome to passions

All my love,
Jeffrey< !signature-->

I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep

[This message has been edited by Jeffrey Carter (edited 04-28-2000).]

netswan
Senior Member

since 2000-03-28

Posts 1369
Washington

2 posted 2000-04-28 07:42 PM

Welcome to Passions, Blue Eyes.

Painful, sad ----these things heal in
time.

netswan

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