Open Poetry #7 |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
I am feeling very weary From the struggle of everyday life Wishing I could close my eyes And wake up with a brand new life One filled with peace and happiness No more arguing or fighting I know that one day soon My wish will be coming true We will part getting our own places You know it is the truth Both looking for a new start For our love has gone You and I will have to be strong I hope that we can get along At least try to be civil Until all is said and done Sorry it ended this way With so much pain and suffering I know I can't love one Who does not love me back This is the path we have chosen I'll be with you until the fork in the road Then we'll go our separate ways Maybe a friendship can be forged ---------------------------------------------------- Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Breaking up is hard to do. This is great, Lone Wolf -- such a tough time in life. Well written, and put the feeling of what you are going through. I hope you can a forge a friendship. Take care! netswan |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
netswan, Yes it is hard to break up.....very hard. Thank you for the kind words. I hope we can to, but am not sure right now. I will try to take care. You too!!! Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LoneWolf~ This is a well-written page of your feelings. 'I'll be with you until the fork in the road Then we'll go our separate ways Maybe a friendship can be forged' I really like this line ... says so much. Optimism is often hard to find in separation ... but you managed to leave room for it to happen. I love the word 'maybe' .. it leaves so much room for us to change our minds. Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
LW, stay strong on that journey. If your wish is coming true, there will be hope and happiness on that path. Life is about discovery, mostly about ourselves. And each time we face that fork in the road, we shape the path that becomes our lives. Best of luck to you on that journey~~~ dh A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge, Thank you very much!! I am doind my best to see the optimism in this situation. Not always easy, but I don't think that just because we no longer want to be married we can't at least be civil and friendly. I thought maybe was a fitting word. After all, it is not really my choice to make. Love ya, too. Lone Wolf Danny, I am doing my best to be strong. Not always easy though. I know the path is mine to shape and the fork will lead to happiness and hope for the future. Thank you for the luck!! I know my friends will help me through. Great advice!! Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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