Open Poetry #7 |
Here's a new one, folks! |
brandondinsmore Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 142OKC, OK |
october's juniper has fallen, measured, down to me, a swirl's trajectory; dismally i stared, and conspired with the blanketing ground. to interject, and be-snatch you... i see a swimming; composing swift waves; doppleganger. burning trees around alter-egos seeking shaded congruency. fau. strike a mistake. |
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brandondinsmore Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 142OKC, OK |
how do you speel 'fau'? is that right? i'm trying for the word for fake. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
spelled "faux" as in "faux pas"; a social blunder; error in etiquette; tactless act or remark. [Pronounced "fo"] |
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brandondinsmore Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 142OKC, OK |
duly noted. how is the rest of the poem though? |
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