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Open Poetry #7

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lucky
Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 1601
Idaho

0 posted 2000-04-26 05:25 PM

yep..!

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Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

1 posted 2000-04-26 06:05 PM

Wow! Lucky, you are such a word weaver of mood.

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

2 posted 2000-04-26 06:25 PM

I was reading this aloud and had to stop and gasp for air once in a while. Lucky, I hope you don't do too many poetry readings! hehe
But what a pleasure. I wasn't sure where this was going to go and it soared at the end!
Yes, Martie, a weaver of word and a weaver of phrase and a weaver of thought.
Liz

doreen peri
Member Elite

since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

3 posted 2000-04-26 08:31 PM

This, sir, is one damn fine piece of writing! Excellent lines in here. Thank you for the read.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2000-04-27 06:57 AM

Lucky~
A morsel of delight.
You are just the master chef of poetry.
Serving up a delicious entree.
Beautifully done, my friend.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

kaleidoscope
Junior Member

since 2000-01-10

Posts 38

5 posted 2000-04-27 06:43 PM

This is an elegant and captivating work of art. Very unusual, and well-crafted.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

6 posted 2000-04-27 09:32 PM

Oh, no poem about a hoot owl can be bad

I loved this one lucky, it left me breathless and wanting for more

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