Open Poetry #7 |
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7 Member
since 2000-04-26
Posts 113Amherst, MA, USA |
it burns like the sun a fearful threat you’ve tried to resist and hide from its ambiguity it can sting and may ruin you in the end but what bliss to remember the sting of the sun’s kiss and to know that it has managed to break through |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions, 7! Great poem! Please check your email for a special welcome! Denise |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Great Entrance! Welcome! Marie~ "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind; And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Very cool, Welcome..... 7 Parker |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi 7, Welcome to passions This is very nice, look forward to more of your work. Cerenity |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
HI! 7? Now that's original. I like it. Welcome to passions. Great poem. All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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7 Member
since 2000-04-26
Posts 113Amherst, MA, USA |
thank you all. i feel very welcome. 7 |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Welcome to Passions! I loved this poem, only I would arrange it a bit differently. I hope you don't mind if I make a suggestion. It burns like the sun, a fearful threat you’ve tried to resist, and hide from its ambiguity, it can sting, and may ruin you in the end, but what bliss to remember the sting of the sun’s kiss and to know that it has managed to break through. Just a suggestion. corinne |
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