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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California 
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MEMORY < !signature-->Today a shine, from realms divine With fire, vigor and truth. I light the skies, gloss on the eyes Of dreams held from my youth. But, lo, in thought, remember not The man I longed to be. For in all flared I have but dared Live life from memory. Never perished, love so cherished, I now must break the chain. If I'm ever to dissever The passion from the pain. I must rebuild upon this field A stairway to my dreams. Clearing at last the shattered past, My house of glass it seems. For every stone, if freely thrown, Surely hath found its mark. As once again I long for when I lived but in the dark. A shadow's voice, having no choice, My words penned to the blind. By gasping breath, awaiting death, If but for peace of mind. Reprimanded, cursed and branded, I gladly bear all shame. Within this shell of living hell, ‘Ever hand me the blame. Means to an end, Time calls, my friend, Alas, to set me free... Of love held true, of dream of you Of memory in me. Michael Anderson For all behind was dark and drear, And all before was night and fear. How many hours of night or day In those suspended pangs I lay, I could not tell; I scarcely knew If this were human breath I drew. Lord Byron [This message has been edited by Michael (edited 04-26-2000).] |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Michael - you write such beautiful heartfelt poetry. --- This is just touching Thank you, netswan |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Michael* Your words are as deep and pure as the heart and soul that it comes from....this is a beautiful piece of work. Hold me for yesterday Kiss me for tomorrow But love me for today. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I must rebuild upon this field A stairway to my dreams. Clearing at last the shattered past, My house of glass it seems. For every stone, if freely thrown, Surely hath found its mark. As once again I long for when I lived but in the dark. A shadow's voice, having no choice, My words penned to the blind. By gasping breath, awaiting death, If but for peace of mind. Reprimanded, cursed and branded, I gladly bear all shame. Within this shell of living hell, ‘Ever hand me the blame. Means to an end, Time calls, my friend, Alas, to set me free... Of love held true, of dream of you Of memory in me. ---------------------- M, Im so deeply moved by this poem... so much pain, still the the light and hope shines thru... I feel your ache and losses in this. this is exceptional writing, truly. heartfelt, take care sweet poetic friend. jm |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
The emotion in this I felt so clearly....your words are like the thread of a spider, woven into a fine web of emotion. Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Michael, yes, yes, yes! A happy ending in sight. Corinne |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Micheal, You get a standing O on this one. Absolutely brilliant piece. All my love, Jeffrey |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
If ever there was a poet here that displayed his soul so beautifully, it is you! A marvelous poem sir!  |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Michael~ I believe you truly do shine my friend and I hope that light never fades as our world would be a sad place without you.... This poem was truly soulful and touching Tracie  Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks [This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 04-26-2000).] |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Great Work, Michael. This is my first day here at Passions, and I am absolutely loving reading beautiful poems like yours. Thanks a lot for sharing your feelings, Sudhir. Sometime back I had written this - Memories ~~~~~~~~ Was walking down memory lane, Was walking on the beach, Throttling the feelings of pain, Keeping doubts out of reach. Had a look at the sands of time The hours when time itself stood still, Could hear distant bells chime, And I was walking while I still stood still! Felt the heat of the sun beating, Could sense an awe that the past left, Saw the sheath of life fleeting, Glimpses of what was there were best. |
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WolfsMate Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 121New York |
An absolutely beautiful, heart felt verse. "You never have to worry...Never fear for I am near" |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Michael this is so moving! I agree with Sharon here, you display your soul so vividly. I hope that you can find walls can be torn down, and rebuilt. For the possiblities of life are endless my friend! Missin ya! Hugs and prayers!!! |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
A wonderful poem, Micheal. Great job. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
None of your words are penned to the blind, Michael. We see and feel every one of them. Excellent writing. Denise |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I can read a thread of hope in this piece, Michael, and determination to move forward. Excellent writing.... |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
netswan, I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Butterflies_dont_cry, your words are very touching...TY. Janet, I don't feel like much is shining in my life at this point  Corinne, I sure could use some happiness right about now, got a cup I can borrow? PdV, as always, you give me too much credit. tracie, I am humbled by you reply. Thank you my friend. Sudhir Iyer, thank you for your reply and for your poetry. Welcome to Passions. Rebecca, All things are possible through Christ... that is where I need to rebuild these walls me thinks. Thank you.Denise, I know you do... TYBalladeer, as always I cling to hope, yes - and when I stop trying to move forward, then indeed, the day will have come for me to stop writing all together. Thank you all for the kind replies. Michael |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
you are simply paused before moving forward, and this is exquisite. Kathleen |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Memories are treasures....... |
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