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Enthusiasm flickered" [part5]
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Enthusiasm flickered" [part5] |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho 
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And so nevertheless < !signature-->I was inclined to trust and respect my need to keep myself to myself and keep myself from the rest so what if I was a capable and provocative that came along with the living and the simple fact that I am a performer should’ve told anyone that at any single listen to any single work should have sent any reeling—like ya know man “sit on my face Soapy Lauren”—should do the trick it’s not a ruse or an inconsistency that I can be as I put it so well late in that last interview both shameless and extroverted—it’s a tremendously fruitful contradiction and just one of the tensions that makes my sound so compelling since too not even fifteen minutes of tripped groupies at classy lounge room doors like it when sex creeps and crazy's ejaculate fan mail all over your floor when they can’t even afford a quart of homogenized milk and more plus total strangers following you bejeweling you down an empty grocery isle valued friends and star struck acquaintances expect time too I don’t have anymore it was a cinch that yours truly would be putting maximum security between blooze work and private affairs if only momma would’ve told me thus I never fully accepted that such popular blooze inevitably tempts people who it is moved into getting a lead on the human being down deep under yet all I’d been told was that my blooze is the riddle & that it’s my art at the root of such ascetic seduction then I was faced with what reality mattered. [conclusion next month] [This message has been edited by lucky (edited 04-26-2000).] |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Lucky, next month sounds fine...it'll take me that long to process all this. You write like my ADD mind thinks, sans the Adderall...put them together and yes, a month might do. But seriously folks, intriguing swirrlly work here. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Very cute Claire, You do know I have some very nice musing times Rosemary and I spent in the meadows. You'd never believe what the Chipmunks thought of it all, not to mention what the Grackles had to say... But I could sure tell you the story..! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
lucky, you are so full and colorful and a little jaded and wise....and I'll bet you play some mean blooze!! |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Martie, You betcha bubba, and I can write some of the most mysterious mystic blooze lines ever seen, yet present a mystique which ever leaves the listener still wondering of all I've said. It's surely a female thing and I'm sure I acquired it from my mother. But nevertheless it's very effective. I did acquire a bit of finesse along with clever and cunning when I worked for "Grafficks" in the Springs as a calligraphist. It was a fine time for learning... and thank God I still am. By the way Martie... your're a peach< !signature--> [This message has been edited by lucky (edited 04-27-2000).] |
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pen of passion Member
since 1999-08-11
Posts 234 |
Intriguing Style --Lucky. |
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brandondinsmore Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 142OKC, OK |
no offense, Lucky, but...you're a girl!? hmmm...well, now i have read EVERYthing over again, dammit! jk |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
For brandondinsmore - don't worry, Lucky is not a girl - I can personally guarantee it, because I'm married to him! (I just thought maybe I should clue you in!) Cheer up! |
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