Open Poetry #7 |
Let it go |
tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
A love so pure, so simple in it's existence, it touches the clouds. A love so passionate, so full of expresion, it overwhelms life's unexpectancies. A love so plain, so compassionate, it gives life meaning. A love so beautiful, so perfect, you let it go. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
this is a nice thought well writ here yuh why do peeps do this when its so perfect? |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
I feel this way too sometimes... Someone lets everything go.......... Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go. |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
"... A love so passionate, so full of expression, it overwhelms life's unexpectancies. This is great, Tulip. I especially love the line in bold -----superb! netswan |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Tulip - I love this poem - it's always sad when you let love go - but then again - if it was real love it may come back to you - I hope yours did. Roniece |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
Wayoutwalt, Thank you. I don't know why people do this, but the only thing to do is let it go, and if it is meant to be, it will be! Cuddlez, Doesn't it stink?! Netswan, I'm glad you liked it. Roniece, I truly believe if it's real, it will come back. I don't know yet, but I'll find out! |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Tulip, I love the simpleness (is that a word?)Yet Power of this piece. Thank you for sharing it. All my love, Jeffrey |
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pen of passion Member
since 1999-08-11
Posts 234 |
Very nice writing Tulip. |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
Jeffrey & Pen, Thank you, I'm glad you liked it! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow |
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