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Why me? (I try)
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Why me? (I try) |
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Blondie Member
since 1999-08-06
Posts 307Ohio 
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I try to open these sealed, shut eyes I try to stop the stress and vanquish these cries but WHY should I try to see? when I don't like the reflection of ME. I try to cut these puppet strings I try to feel the cry as the angel sings but WHY set myself free? when none will ever trust ME. I try to speak words against you I try to make all listen too but WHY speak so loudly? when none is able to hear ME. I try to run away from this pain I try to stop these tears of rain but WHY try to continue to flee? when none will be able to comfort ME. I try to open, cut, speak, and run from thee but WHY, because I'm hurting none but ME. |
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Cutie Putootie Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 54Ohio |
This is very disturbing to me. I don't really know why but just something about the cut, open, run thing. I hope everything is okay for you, yesterday you seemed fine when you came over. In my prayers Kim |
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Blondie Member
since 1999-08-06
Posts 307Ohio |
I am doing fine, just some things that has been on my heart that has been bothering me. AND you know my situation at home so... |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
I hear you LOUD & Clear. Very dark Yet powerful in it's wording. I can truly relate to this ...well almost...lol All my love, Jeffrey |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
So sad and dark ----Makes me want to hug you and tell you that life runs in cycles, and some are very painful and from those we hopefully learn. And some are very joyful and those are for what we live for. Take care netswan |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very powerful poem, Blondie. Wonderful writing. Denise |
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Blondie Member
since 1999-08-06
Posts 307Ohio |
Netswan~ well I live in Ohio and you can come give me a HUG anyday...I would love it  |
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Blondie Member
since 1999-08-06
Posts 307Ohio |
dnsyder~ Thanks so much  |
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tincan5 Junior Member
since 2000-04-25
Posts 33 |
Very powerful and moving poem. Wishing you much inner peace and happiness....  ) |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
 This is so pain filled...you wrote it wonderfully through the pain and I hope you find comfort in the release, I offer you *Angel Wing Hugs* for they ask nothing in return. Hold me for yesterday Kiss me for tomorrow But love me for today. |
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Blondie Member
since 1999-08-06
Posts 307Ohio |
Thanks Butterfly...I appreciate it |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Heartfelt words in your writing speak loudly....I am not sure if you really are as trapped as you might feel sometimes. Emotion cloud the thoughts of the mind...which so often is the best feeling there is...but at times can hinder our true needs. As I don't know your dealings in your life and can only look into you here... I see one of compassion by holding your words and not speaking out against the one who has hurt you....and I can see love deep in your heart as one to forgive. And know that there is one of comfort that knocks....Open the door and let the troubles lay at rest. Grace and peace be with you Blondie A man does not love a woman because she is beautiful...But she is beautiful because he loves her. |
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Blondie Member
since 1999-08-06
Posts 307Ohio |
Knight~ I have to say if you would put the reply you just sent me in poetry form it would be something beautiful. I don't hate towards anyone, and I only get mad at myself when it comes down to it... I can't have anger built in me, and I admit, I hide behind masks of laughter sometime but that's the only way I know how to deal with things....by hiding. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
I can relate, Blondie .... I was very good at 'hiding', infact I think I had it down to a science .... then one day ..... I just had enough and left the bad situation ... I thank God , for my life took a wonderful change ... biggest was the respect, I finally felt for myself ..... I wish sunshine for you, too .... Excellently stated ..... |
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