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Without Your Love
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Without Your Love |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
In my darkest hour Of solitary revelry The time alone Helps me to be free The years are all misty Now that you are here And living without you Is the only thing I fear I am all that I am Because you took my hand Without your love I alone, cannot stand |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Nice poem  ~smiles~ |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Yes you can, James, yes you can. Corinne |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Now that you are here And living without you Is the only thing I fear I am all that I am Because you took my hand Without your love I alone, cannot stand ------------ perfect Jer,...its like you read my mind(smile)... so much emotion and devotion spoke in a few perfect words...nothing more needs to be said. except perhaps-- your timing is as perfect as this poem.  your jm Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders And it makes me want to touch you there. And the light in your eyes makes me feel Like there's something much better out there Something kind... And I know someday I might be looking around Trying to find some purpose Well purpose it can't be that hard to find As long as I've got the wind... The wind and your love to carry me. vertical horizon |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
 JML* This is so beautiful, the all consuming love that makes you feel as if you can't live without it...the only way to love JML the only way, because in the end you know if you lost it....you would go on because there is no other choice.Hold me for yesterday Kiss me for tomorrow But love me for today. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JML, Good thoughts, good words, good poem. |
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galaxy84 Junior Member
since 2000-04-24
Posts 18Pa, USA |
JML, my thoughts exactly. wonderful poem galaxy84 |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Perfect description of true love. All my love, jeffrey |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
Wow, I hope I'm able to find someone one day, that feels that way about me!!! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
JML, this is indeed an excellent poem, you have found a love that is all consuming. . .such is the way of love. . .and I see that you have found it. . . Wonderful poem my friend. . . --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Lady Web Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 96Houston, Texas |
Words of love so sweet. NIcely expressed. |
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