Open Poetry #7 |
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Memory |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sitting here alone Hand on the phone Memories flood back Wow I'd lost track Of what year It is getting clear Long long time ago As you well know Sat here once before Inside that door Listening to you Our love so true We were so in love You fit me like a glove Who could've knew I had no clue Love would turn to hate On another date Many years had passed Thought it would last Why did it fail Become so stale You'll know why Before the final good-bye Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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brandondinsmore Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 142OKC, OK |
Good job. Expand please. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
A poignant post, my friend. Corinne |
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WolfsMate Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 121New York |
I can well relate to this. Wonderful verse! "You never have to worry...Never fear for I am near" |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
LW, enjoyed your poem, though it feels like there's some sadness within. ~~nice writing~~~ |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
brandon....thanks. Expand how?? Corinne....yes it is. Thank you, my friend. WolfsMate....Sorry you relate and thanks!! Danny....Glad you enjoyed it. Guess it is bittersweet in a way. Feel sad these days. Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
If people could know there wouldn't be so many tales of woe, or divorces for that matter. Lone Wolf -- this is great --- I like the way you wrote this netswan |
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