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RSEvans
Senior Member

since 1999-10-23

Posts 1147
Tulsa, OK, USA

0 posted 2000-04-17 02:17 PM

Through clear-paned glass
A shroud of mist
Over fields does pass
The grass be kiss'd
By morning dew
A vivid memory
Comes clear in view
Of you and me.
I spy you there
Among the others
Your sweet blonde hair
Your presence smothers
The air from my life
Now gone so quickly
To pain and strife
It is not in me
To continue on
I would be amiss
And presence gone
Where the grass was kiss'd.

Knowlege tempered by wisdom...Wisdom tamed by youth.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-04-17 02:28 PM

By morning dew
A vivid memory
Comes clear in view
Of you and me.
I spy you there
Among the others
Your sweet blonde hair
Your presence smothers
The air from my life
Now gone so quickly
To pain and strife
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beautiful, serene poem...very calming and lovely to read.
very nice work,
take care,jm

Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders
And it makes me want to touch you there.
And the light in your eyes makes me feel
Like there's something much better out there
Something kind...
And I know someday I might be looking around
Trying to find some purpose
Well purpose it can't be that hard to find
As long as I've got the wind...
The wind and your love to carry me.
vertical horizon

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2000-04-17 02:34 PM

Wonderful......

RSEvans
Senior Member

since 1999-10-23

Posts 1147
Tulsa, OK, USA

3 posted 2000-04-17 03:06 PM

Thanks JM and Sunshine

poetFemmeFatale
Member Elite

since 1999-07-25

Posts 2646
Arkansas

4 posted 2000-04-17 03:08 PM

Very serene indeed, and also breathtaking...almost as if time were standing still, as I saw you standing there. Lovely!

RSEvans
Senior Member

since 1999-10-23

Posts 1147
Tulsa, OK, USA

5 posted 2000-04-18 06:31 AM

Thanks sis

Corazon
Senior Member

since 2000-02-02

Posts 1209

6 posted 2000-04-18 09:25 AM

nice really nice imagery....you shared a precious moment beautifully

Pepper
Member Elite

since 1999-08-19

Posts 3079
Southern Florida

7 posted 2000-04-18 11:03 AM

Very,very Beautiful, Robert ......
I admire your work ......

"This is where you will win the battle .... in the playhouse of your mind."
Maxwell Maltz

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