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Lady Web Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 96Houston, Texas |
"Wishing Hearts" Written By: Melissa S. Lopez ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ A star we wish in the moonlit night For one day our souls to reunite In each others arms we long to be Gazing in each others eyes we see No need for spoken words Our hearts communicate a language unheard Though fate continues to keep us apart Thus not allowing to indulge our hearts To feel his hand caress my skin A touch my heart would definitly recommend To caress him the same in return A lingering desire we both do yearn Would set our bodies and souls afire Awaiting this union and what will transpire But for now we anxiously wait The day our hearts with love will consummate ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ So what do you think ? [This message has been edited by Lady Web (edited 04-30-2000).] |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Nicely written... another romantic in Passions... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very romantic, Lady Web! Denise |
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PoohBear24 Junior Member
since 2000-04-24
Posts 18Tampa, FL. |
Oh this is lovely Finish your beer--There are sober people in China! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LadyWeb~ I see your heart peeking through this one. Romanticism is alive and well.  Wonderfully done. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Lady Web, this is excellent - So, sad, yet so hopeful. netswan |
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Lady Web Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 96Houston, Texas |
Thank you very much, for your continued inspirational support in my writing, that everyone here at passions has given me. [This message has been edited by Lady Web (edited 04-30-2000).] |
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Go0fYdUcK Junior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 28CA |
wow i really like your poem!!! *KhAnH-eLySe* |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Wonderful poem of inspiring effects Tracie~ Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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