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The Dream
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The Dream |
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David2 Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 407 |
The Dream Oppressive slumber, wicked cold and stark, Domain of heartless imps of evil schemes. Please rescue me from nightmares of the dark, And banish every ghost of restless dreams. Transport me to that place where lovers dwell, Enveloped in a shroud of perfect peace, Where sorrows of a saddened sleep dispel, And aches of love that’s lost must surely cease. Your words must push unfounded fears aside, As feelings strive to conquer intellect. To comfort and to stem the rushing tide, Of poignant pains, destructive and direct. Declare your love unwavering and true, And ease this racing heart that pines for you. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
A perfect sonnet A romantic heart What a combination! Very, very beautiful Liz |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
beautiful! I loved the rhyming scheme and the deep emotion behind the words. i felt a sense of longing in this one. excellent! amy  ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Beautifully done! David, this is really great - netswan |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
This was awesome, David. Simply amazing .~Susie~ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I could spend the entire day reading your sonnets and never tire of them. They are all perfection! Denise |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Well written...enjoyed muchly. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
David2~ Very pretty and very well-done. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
David, I must chime in here with Denise. I can easily fancy us sharing a BIG book of your lovely verses...and hanging on every poetic breath and turn. This is just superb. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Lovely and very romantic. Corinne |
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