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* Cosmic Kisses *
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* Cosmic Kisses * |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas 
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** Cosmic Kisses ** Kiss your lips I breathe you in and taste the starry skies... A galaxy of emerald green I travel in your eyes. Enticing sweet your whispers are your soul it beckons mine... To fly away there on your kiss sweet celestial wine. I taste your thoughts I feel your dreams the moon shines in your heart... Your sweet embrace so heavenly the planets play their part. You and I both born to know with heaven, we are one... Kiss your lips I breathe you in and taste the setting sun.  by poetFemmeFatale April 22, 2000 |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Well Gen...what can I say...I'm honored that you noticed my eyes!!!ROFLMAO!!!!!! This is sweet and mushy...and I shall stick my tongue out at you now!!!  LOLVery touching seriously Gen... Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
WOW pFF. This is great! I love your choise of words and expression!Much enjoyed!  |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Er.....devina? 'Twas not you I was licking, however, if you really want to think that, I'll let you slide since your eyes are green! LOL This guy is much better looking....(no offfense!) hehehe Irie - - Thanks for reading, so glad you enjoyed!  |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Another exceptional piece. You are on a roll. All my love, Jeffrey |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
So now the truth comes out eh? LOL Seriously Gen, this was a great poem and it's good to know that I'm not the only Hopeless Romantic around here. . . "I breathe you in and taste the setting sun. . ." couldn't have said it better myself. . . ---------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
This is very romantic~ Responses are quite funny...my eyes are green as well, only I will not fantasize that you were licking or ummm...kissing...any part of me. LOL! Beautiful poem~ Marie~ |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Yep... a saltine poem here... wouldn't kick anyone out of bed for eating crackers who could write like this... (can say that since I have blue eyes... hehe) |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Jeffrey - - *curtsies* to you sir Jeff ! Sven - - What truth? Nobody knows nothing! LOL I'm hopeless, and you're romantic....  hehemariee66 - - ROFL about me licking you too!  Mike - - ??? What's a saltine poem? One that makes you lick your lips? hehe Blue's good....  Thanks guys, for this to be such a mushy poem, I've sure had fun with the replies! ROFL |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Come on Gen!! We all know it. . .you might just as well admit it. . . Come to our side Gen. . . come to the Romantic side. . . LOL LOL LOL LOL ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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PoohBear24 Junior Member
since 2000-04-24
Posts 18Tampa, FL. |
This is so beautiful! I wish i had your talent! Finish your beer--There are sober people in China! |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Gosh....I could simply melt in this one.... Oh my. A man does not love a woman because she is beautiful...But she is beautiful because he loves her. |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
This is just gorgeous ---so warm and alive - and clever netswan |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
What no tounge?!?!? This has a timeless piece in it...piece of what I won't say... What is this mushy stuff, sis? I miss the distraction but damn...where's the death and mayhem? j/k... Wish I could inspire like this... |
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brandondinsmore Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 142OKC, OK |
Very well done. Great rhymes. Astronomy is always a good metaphor. |
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