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How much women really mean to us
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How much women really mean to us |
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Cabral New Member
since 2000-04-17
Posts 8RI |
How much you really mean to me Where can I start when I have so much to say? How can I explain how seeing you brightens my day? How can we be so close and yet so far apart? Where do I begin telling you how much you've touched my heart? First of all I'd like to say thank you for being who you are But I must ask how come I feel you are so far We used to be real close where nothing would come between us But now I feel as if we are total opposites But remember I'm always here for you And I hope you feel the same way too We've been through a lot in the past That's why I know our friendship will last I have a lot memories with you Some bad, mostly good but no matter what we always made it through You mean a lot to me, more than you will ever know But with a friend like you I am afraid to let go Finding someone like you is rare That's why I want to let you know how much I really care But sometimes I feel you don't really care Losing you as a friend is the only thing I most fear I don't want you to feel neglected for everything you've done I just wish we will stay this close for years to come |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Hello Cabral..... What a beautiful tribute to your friend! I hope they are able to read this and see how much you really care. Welocme to passions..... ~Sheri |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Welcome to Passions, Cabral. Lovely poem - full of heart's pain. I hope you still have your friend. If not, ask her to read your poem --) netswan |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Welcome to passions. Your poem inspired this one from me. And that doesn't happen very often. I'm So Afraid You alone mean the world to me Without you I would not be Please don't ever leave me If I lost you I would forever be in the shade Never again would I see the sun My life would no longer be Jeffrey |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
I love this poem!! It is a beautiful tribute to a friend and I empathise completely with the emotions therein...I too have feared losing a wonderful friend. Lovely poem! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to Passions! Please check your email for a special message. I look forward to reading more from you.  |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
how marvelous this poem is. Look forward to reading more. Corinne |
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