~ Fatal Attraction ~..........................................( Haiku )

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Open Poetry #7

~ Fatal Attraction ~..........................................( Haiku )

Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

0 posted 2000-04-21 05:49 PM

Fatal Attraction
~~~

Fascinating worms
with their captivating squirms
attracting gamefish
~~~

I'm not ugly!
I'm just visually challenged!

Meadowmuse
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since 1999-12-27

Posts 3263

1 posted 2000-04-21 05:57 PM

You'd be surprised what a well placed captivating squirm might attract, Rex.

(on second thought, perhaps you mightn't)

Cute poem!

~ Claire

kaile

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since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

2 posted 2000-04-21 06:21 PM

lovely haiku...i esp like the title....it brings me in,anxious and eager to read your work....brilliant!

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

3 posted 2000-04-22 12:12 PM

Rex~
Wonderful title and the Haiku grand

Tracie~

Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

4 posted 2000-04-22 12:22 PM

Delightful, Rex! Thanks for the smiles!

Denise

mariee66
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since 2000-01-30

Posts 596
Recess, OfYourMind

5 posted 2000-04-22 01:40 AM

Delicious crawlers
Dancing and prancing on hook
Luring bigger game.

Well...I tried

Good one, Rex!
Marie~

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

6 posted 2000-04-22 01:45 AM

I sure could use a weekend of isolation out on the lake... nothing but me, the worms, and the fish... Thanx, Rex.

Michael

Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

7 posted 2000-04-22 09:56 AM

Claire ... What ... don't leave us hanging ... tell us

kaile ... the title fits the haiku ... but the haiku doesn't fit ones expectations

Tracie~ ... you are very kind ... thankyou

Denise ... thanks for stopping in

mariee ... you should title and post this ... it's good!

Michael ... meet you there ... don't even care if I catch anything ... just like the quiet sound of waves lapping on the side of the boat, drifting on a gentle rolling breeze

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