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Crybaby
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since 2000-04-18
Posts 5
Leavenworth,Ks,USA

0 posted 2000-04-21 04:47 PM


Unhappy Love

Always Looking
Never Finding

Never Knowing
Never Meeting

Never Seeing
Never Believing

Always Waiting
Never Getting

So Whenever You Are Unhappy
It's Almost Always Because Of Love

 

© Copyright 2000 George L. Vega, Jr. - All Rights Reserved
Lady Web
Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 96
Houston, Texas
1 posted 2000-04-21 07:33 PM


You are quite right about love it is sooo
unpredictible. Nice poem.

Honeybee
Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA
2 posted 2000-04-21 08:53 PM


Such a sad poem, I too have been where you are now, but believe me, it does get better.

It's true love can move mountains when you have it or it can leave you feeling empty with nothing when you don't have it.

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee  

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2007-06-13 04:37 PM


I think someone would feel like this if they focused too much on love, when in reality, most of our relationships will be friendships...one or the other not wanting to fall in love...James
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