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~What A Woman Wants~...the romantic poets guide for Sven's challenge LOL |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
What a woman wants is every romantic man's quest, to capture her heart and trust is a challenging test. Many a good man has tried to hold his maiden's heart in his hand, many a good man has failed ... lost to being able to understand. Women are complex and hard to read, sometimes this is true, but its really not so hard to please us if you know what to do. Women need to be needed ... they need to feel secure, they want to know your intentions are honest and pure. They want to know you love them with both passion and respect, If you can give these things to us--then your love we will sweetly reflect. A woman who is content can make her man's heart a rare treasure, She'll give you days of wonder and nights of sheer pleasure. A woman who feels loved, will give herself to you body, mind, and soul, she will give her all to complete you and make you feel whole. Is is really so hard to understand the way of a woman's heart ... try being gentle, tender, kind and caring -- this is a good place to start. The reward of patience and honesty will be ... all the things your fantasies are made of, all the gifts and rewards that come with comittment and unconditional love. And if your really good my romantic, poetic, Knight... she will rock your ever loving world until morning's light.  OH COME ON --You KNOW that's what you wanted to hear.. and besides ... you didn't really expect me to be GOOD the WHOLE poem did you??? later hunk of burning love gators  |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Way to go JM! Great post! |
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nando Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 87Vaxjo, Smaland, Sweden |
Mighty good fair maiden... And yes it was what we wanted to hear  The trouble nowadays is finding someone who let you open these romantic sides that lie deep within... But when you do, the reward is two hearts connecting and sharing the way it´s supposed to be... Laughed at the end, and was moved at the beginning, so very nice -nando- Ask me how to live your life, and this to you I´ll say: make your choises true and wise, so that when tomorrow will arise, you´ll smile at yesterday... |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
~Janet Marie~ You go girl! Well written and LMAO at the last two lines: "And if you're really good, my romantic, poetic knight... she will rock your everloving world until morning's light" C'mon men, you need to take Janet Marie's advice Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
ALRIGHT!!!! you GO girl! Great poem! |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Janet YOU GO GIRL!!!! WOOOOOHOOOO TELL THEM LIKE IT IS!! LMAO. This was great, very well said and the last two lines made me laugh out loud. Thanks for posting this. Now gentlemen do as the lady says lol...  love ya girl, amy "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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lorilockheart Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 206Alabama |
J. Marie, You shocked me there at the end - but great though. Defintely glad to be back. I've missed your words. Good job here. Lori ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance. song by LeeAnn Womack ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
And if your really good my romantic, poetic, Knight... she will rock your ever loving world until morning's light sausy. but the rest of the poem is true. I think everyone (men and women, just change the gender to suit your sexually preference) should recite this poem. In this poem are the key ingredients for a loving relationship. Women need to be needed ... they need to feel secure, they want to know your intentions are honest and pure. They want to know you love them with both passion and respect, A woman who is content can make her man's heart a rare treasure, She'll give you days of wonder and nights of sheer pleasure. A woman who feels loved, will give herself to you body, mind, and soul, she will give her all to complete you and make you feel whole. try being gentle, tender, kind and caring -- this is a good place to start. The reward of patience and honesty will be ... all the things your fantasies are made of, all the gifts and rewards that come with comittment and unconditional love. Wonderful poem Janet, poetic wisdom as always. beautiful One of favourites from your excellent collection of poems. ------------------------ "I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else"-Richey Edwards "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "Libraries gave us power Then work came and made us free What price now for a shallow piece of dignity" Nicky Wire, A design for Life. manic street preachers "Rock 'n' roll is our epiphany Culture, alienation, boredom and despair" "To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting." E.E Cummings. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Right on! words that us men know but need to be reminded of every once in awhile. Damn straight! I am sure you know what I mean fair maiden. There is no greater friend to a man than the woman he loves. That intimacy combined the mystic qualities of love creates the greatest friendship in the universe. A history of family qualities develop to form a binding union. Yes, yes yes the sexual rewards are nice! but definetly those deep love rewards are the ones that last in the stream of time forever. Oh God what a feeling eh? All you have to do is make it work - so my message to all the great knights - never take that special lady for granted - remember you are the one who chose to love her! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Janet you are so right...tell them girl! And ethome...shew you go man, so right you are! WHAT A GIRL WANTS< WHAT A GIRL NEEDS>>>I AM SINGING THAT SONG! HAHA! [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 06-09-2000).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Janet Marie--I'm so glad you posted this...I think we women kind of got left out of that challange...but, you told it so good...Great poem! |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh JM I hope all those guys out there listen to this as it is exactly what we want to them to say and do. Good one Janny..gator Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Janet, I agree and hope they listen too. You have said it all!!!! Great one my friend!!! Later-romantic-gator!! LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Superb fellow butterfly... I must add one thing - I simply have to have a man who knows how to argue...debate wise that is - don't want no boring sop hey! K |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
All right JM! This is awesome! I too am LMAO at the last two lines..you go girlfriend!  *Krista Knutson* "Thought is real, physical is the illusion..." Albert from ~What Dreams May Come~ |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
You go girl!!!!! But now you can tell me......Gemini helped you didn't she! Hey that rhymed.....I am a poet ..and I didn't even know it!!! LOl Marina |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Lady Janet. . . Thou hast indeed spoken words of truth We will take them to heart indeed forsooth! Because how could any Knight worth his name Refuse the words of such a great. . .well, you know!!! LOL  ---------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
*** Standing Ovulation *** Er....ovation that is!  hehe Girl, this is good, where the heck do you find the time to be such an active participant in here?? Everywhere I look, you name is pasted somewhere! LOL Keep writing some for me too! "Fantasies enrich our lives to the fullest, but true satisfaction comes from creating your own story in the real world! Live out your fantasies & make a storybook with beautiful pictures for the world to enjoy! -poetFemme |
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enigma23 New Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 2 |
hey this ain't half bad, I'll have to show this t omy wife and see what she says about it. |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
Well, doing all this would be quite tough...but I'm doing my best! I hope a_little_girl likes my way of trying to make her happy... Got any more points for me, O Wise Janet Marie? Little Spyro T. Dragon ___________________ P.S. You've got quite a big standing ovationist-crowd here (thanks for the phrase Femme Fatale ) but don't forget your little cheering squad back at the Pub! I miss you, if no one else there does...  |
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Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada |
A path to follow and a reward at the end! What more could a guy ask for but an explanation like that one? LOL! Great post. |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
JM, you mean to tell me it's that simple? "gentle, tender, kind, and caring"! So what does a man do when the woman he wants is surrounded by gentle, tender, kind and caring men. What does a guy do to stand out from the crowd. What does a woman want most from the knight trying to win her heart? Killing her with kindness is not the answer! And the secret is................ |
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