Open Poetry #7 |
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desperado Member
since 1999-05-24
Posts 312FT Hood,Tx ![]() |
wait juat a moment in time freeze the movie in your mind put aside the whispers filter out the doubt look into my eyes ignore the muted shout don't you wish to melt away? into the golden sun? don't you want to wisk away, and have a little fun? aren't you sick of pain and fear inside your life all I know inside of me I want you as my wife I'm tired of the race I'm ill with blank disgrace I want the world to leave us be I want the world to set us free take my hand and smile you can let those tears fall I'll make it worth your while and always give it all through good and bad I'll love you through think and thin I'll stay from the blinking of the sun to the fading of the day and in the night I'll hold you until the sun appears I'll take away your sorrows, and cat away your fears so let our love combine us and let our spirits soar just take my hand within you and I'll love you evermore... "There were times in my life when I was going insane tryin to walk through the pain when I lost my grip and I hit the floor yeah I thought I could leave but couldn't get out the door" - Aerosmith "Amazing" |
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Angelwings Member
since 1999-08-27
Posts 222IL, USA |
What a wonderful expression of your love. I hope that the world leaves you alone and you are able to have this love in your life thank you for sharing your poem with us. I look forward to reading more. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
*sigh* Just Beautiful! ![]() Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain." I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow (unkown) |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Watch out, des... Your romantic side is taking over.... Lucky lady you've got there, my friend.. ![]() |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Just wanted this for my library, it's so beautiful. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Saxoness![]()
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
*gives a this just totally makes me melt sigh* smootches to you jw "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Desperado, Simply beautiful a keeper for sure, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Just looking through my library and this gem appeared. Desperado, this is so beautiful, I had to make another comment on it. ![]() Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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desperado Member
since 1999-05-24
Posts 312FT Hood,Tx |
you know Ive gotten replies andemails about this one and I just have to say thanks to all out there who read it and saved it. it means alot to me. james People demand freedom of speech to make up for the freedom of thought which they avoid. --Soren Kierkegaard |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
looking for missing poets. I hope you and yours are well tonight, Des. Enjoyed the power in this one. I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
just beautiful! |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
I hope no one minds me bumping up a few of my favourites D |
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