Open Poetry #7 |
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Poets Prayer - National Poetry Month |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Why must I write at this hour? While other mortals sleep? When all is quiet I will arise and to my computer will creep. So full is my soul of words unspoken of feelings I must share. I rise again, in the dead of night and begin my poet’s prayer. Deliver me from pedantry, from silly limerick ways. Give me depth and heart and love and sometimes, give me praise. |
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Jeffrey Carter![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
PdV, Much praise coming from me....this is very beautiful All my love, Jeffrey |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Great reminder for National Poetry Month Devine! This poet isn't creeping to the puter she's gonna creep to bed ![]() |
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Boovoltz New Member
since 2000-04-19
Posts 8 |
I'll give you praise. That was great. ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
As always....great poem PdV ! |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
"been there, done that" It's the only time there is real peace and quiet for me to write, so I do know what you mean. Lovely words here. "So full is my soul of words unspoken"! Magnificent! Thank you, Ellie 02 |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is great, Sharon! I'd love to be up in those wee small hours again, bursting with inspiration. Those were the days! I wasn't even really tired in the morning either though I didn't get much sleep! Well, maybe again, some day! Denise |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
this is the PIP anthem poet devine i loved it once and always will be special to me ![]() |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Depth and heart and love you have in abundance... for it shines through your words. *S* So praising you is easy... *G* Love this! ![]() |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Thank you all for your kind replies....sometimes the loneliness of the night can be alleviated by writing....... |
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Mistikman Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682San Jose, CA, USA |
bahh, you know you always have my praise ![]() ![]() |
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Lady Web Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 96Houston, Texas |
Very nice, And I do honestly believe that is when the best words come to mind. |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Wonderful poem, PdV!! |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
PdV, I've been there..but have never written anything in homage to the dismal dank time when the world sleep, but the mind runs. Wonderful job of putting every poet's feeling so succinctly on paper, and the web. E pluribus poeticus unum Alicat |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Poet deVine, This is so lovely and so true, I get these urges to write in the middle of the night, but most of the time I find myself scrambling for a peice of paper hoping I don't for get the little didy that will not let me sleep. Thank you for sharing this, Cerenity |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Thank you again....(Ali you want me to put my pluribus where?) |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Exellent, Ms. deVine! I am also one of those up in the middle of the night, pouring her soul out into verse..I'm sure many of us can relate. Wonderful work. ![]() *Krista Knutson* As soon as man does not take his existence for granted, but beholds it as something unfathomably mysterious, thought begins. ~*Albert Schweitzer*~ |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
hmmmm....thinking she's seen this before.... Gee, I think I've even been there a time or two myself...hmmmm...yep, I have. *giggles* As always, Sharon...wonderful work. ![]() |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I have a bed and lay upon it Dreaming of a little sonnet Or sestina or some ode To come in my sweet abode. Pentameter dances in my head Villanelles invade my bed I gotta get to sleep sometime But I am overcome with rhyme. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Your wee hours of writing are something I can understand very well. Excellently expressed... ~ Claire |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Amen, Amen, Amen But for my poetry's sake I'm afraid that I Must wait till morn's awake!! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
If I don't write it then and there It drifts out into space somewhere Soometimes I feel necessity To take my keyboard to bed with me Loved it! Liz |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Wonderful PDV reminds me of someone I know..... chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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