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I Cry Out Your Name
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I Cry Out Your Name |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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In the still of the night you come to me of memories spent and all those feelings rush over me again impetuously moving straight to my brain as I cry out your name ----- my hands, have let go but my heart never will if my words could blanket the skies and fill in every corner and crevice of this earth, again this won't be enough my words of you are never ending they will continue to flow and spill over and over from the depths of my heart Angel of Darkness 9/6/00 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain." I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow (unkown) |
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SorrowsMystress Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 178I'm a wanderer, a nomad...I don't live in one particular area, Just wherever I end up. |
This is absolutely beautiful, I feel exactly what your words convey at this very moment. I long so much to hold that one person special to me, and dream about them, all the love comes flooding back, but unfortunatly for me, that can no longer happen. And as I wake up crying out his name, I know that he will never again hear it... Thanks for sharing this peice. Made me cry, made me feel... so much passion and emotion... very good work. I think that you have a wonderful talent and am greatful to be able to share in the readings of it. "It was my love that did us both to death. " -Sylvia Plath |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Wonderful Work! It always seems worst in the still of the night. God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
if my words could blanket the skies and fill in every corner and crevice of this earth, again this won't be enough .... words were never spoken truer, perhaps... A fleeting thought with feelings, a poem constructed out of sensitve tenderness, Angel of the dark, I salute thee...... Regards, sudhir My heart is pounding, my stomach's inside out I'm feeling kind-a-shaky, my mind is full of doubt All I ever think about, is fearing fear itself, Wish I could unscrew my head and put it on the shelf Everything is twisted, everything is oh so tight, Don't know what I'm looking at, the lights are all too bright My brain's about to crumble, spill out on the floor Sweep 'em up. Throw 'em away, don't want 'em anymore Clouds race across the sky, day turns into night, Still there are the questions, no answers in sight Everything is twisted, everything is oh so tight, Starin' out the window, everything is just too bright Brain's about to crumble, spill out on the floor, Wish I could unscrew my head, and kick it out the door... You know I'm feeling kind-a....Strange You know I'm feeling kind-a....Strange ~ Strange ~ Joe Satriani (Flying in a Blue Dream) |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
How sweetly heartfelt, Dark Angel and well written. Love sure can be painful ~netswan |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
God!!!!! this was fantastic Kathleen "How do I love thee? Let me count the ways. I love thee to the depth and breadth and height My soul can reach, when feeling out of sight For the ends of Being and ideal Grace." Elizabeth Barrett Browning |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
my hands, have to let go but my heart never will What beauty these words alone have, you have written something very special here...Well done. TC~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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narima New Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 5 |
wow, just last night I felt the same way. those words were exactly how i felt when I was thinking of that someone.beautifully pictured. |
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Poertree Senior Member
since 1999-11-05
Posts 1359UK |
beautiful maree .. actually i think you write better in sadness ...... i therefore can't wait for your next "bad" poem ... MP |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"My hands have let go but my heart never will." This speaks for the devotion and the intensity of love. We don't want to let go of the beauty of love yet as we do the pain of the loss of our love lingers. James |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
The amount you have grown as a poet and in strength as aperson in the short time I have known you I find to be astounding. Wonderful work my friend.  |
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Lorraine Nisbet Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 218Jersey City, NJ USA |
Dark Angel~ my hands have let go but my heart never will well said...well done!! ~Lorraine A great poet is nothing more....than a discovered amateur |
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