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Scene II |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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I'm sure that the stars are beautiful tonight But I'm not looking at them right now You're the only thing that's in my sight You really amaze me, I'm still wondering how The moon glistens like a flame in your eyes Casting over your face in a delicate glow Your smile is brighter than the starry skies Right here with you is all I want to know The wind whispers a song through the trees Filling my head with a wisp of jasmine sweet You're the one who puts my mind at ease The one who fills my life and makes it complete ------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Breathtakingly beautiful, Sven; It takes a special heart to convey these feelings and a lucky lady she is. Lovely poem. marcy |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
The moon glistens like a flame in your eyes Casting over your face in a delicate glow ... You're the one who puts my mind at ease The one who fills my life and makes it complete .... If I may add... Delicately poised, the moon in your crystalled eye winks , Serenely calmed, this heart of mine, sublimely blinks, As I lay this soul's case to rest, Symptoms of love, this is at its best. .... Sven, you are majestic in your forays of romance and romantic poetry....lots of wishes come your way... By the way, did I miss Scene I?  Regards, sudhir. I am still stuck to Pink Floyd... < !signature--> Hey you, out there in the cold, Getting lonely, getting old, can you feel me? Hey you, standing in the aisle, With itchy feet and fading smile, can you feel me? Hey you, don't help them to bury the light. Don't give in without a fight. Hey you, out there on your own, Sitting naked by the phone, would you touch me? Hey you, with your ear against the wall, Waiting for someone to call out, would you touch me? Hey you, would you help me to carry the stone? Open your heart, I'm coming home.... by Roger Waters (Pink Floyd) - The Wall [This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (edited 06-09-2000).] |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
WOW! I can't keep up with this... my thinking cap's gonna explode! Eric |
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