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SorrowsMystress
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since 2000-04-01
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I'm a wanderer, a nomad...I don't live in one particular area, Just wherever I end up.

0 posted 2000-06-09 01:07 AM


Thank You for Loving me (when no one else would) *For John*

I guess that now it's over
You'll move on, happy as ever
Who am I to stop you?
I have forgiven all you've said
To hurt me
As I hope you've forgiven
The same actions I took against you...
You meant a lot to me during our time together
I will always have a special place
In my heart, in my soul
A soft spot reserved just for you
While the rest of me turns to stone
And while I no longer will allow myself to feel
I will always feel for you...
And when you find that you are in the dark
That no one can understand you
Or that you just can't understand yourself
You will always have someone to turn to...
ME....
You meant the world to me
You made this desolate soul of mine
Extravagant.... filled with emotion
Filled with happieness
Filled with compassion....
You have given me more
Than those have ever done before.
I will not look back on us
As a mistake
But as an experience
I've always wanted
And thankfully got to acheive.
I will not look back on us
As an unfortunate mishap
But as a glorious time in my life
The one chance I had to be happy.
And if, for any strange reason
You find you still love me...
I will be here...
And I will welcome you back
Gladly
But if still
you discover that I am not what you want
I will still be here
Ready to be your friend
When you need me the most
Ready to understand you
When no one else does
All I ask
Is that you don't forget me
And you will look back on us
Fondly....
I love you
I always will
And I will be here for you
through your tough times
and through your good times
And you will forever be
The one for me...
The one that will always remain
My  true love...
Thank you for the good times
Thank you for showing me
That life is more than just pain
And dissapointment
Thank you for showing me
Me....



 "It was my love that did us both to death. " -Sylvia Plath


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netswan
Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369
Washington
1 posted 2000-06-09 04:02 AM


Aw, Sorrow, what a sweet sad and forlorn
poem - yet with such wisdom and realization
that life gives and life takes and we learn
from those experiences.  Well written.

~netswan

Dark Angel
Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

2 posted 2000-06-09 04:52 AM


Lovely SM, well done.  

 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)



JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2000-06-09 05:57 AM


Lovely thoughts and a very mature and unselfish attitude.   This is so soft and smooth.   James
amazon_lover
Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland
4 posted 2000-06-09 12:10 PM


beautiful thoughts and you show maturity and courage in your parting.....its difficult to let go of something but if there is no other way good friendship will always be there o hold dearly and you unselfish nature is too good...but still there's some hope..go for it..until you realise it's impossible..then carry on with your life.

Sincerely
A_L

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