Open Poetry #7 |
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Thank You for Loving Me (when no one else would) *For John* |
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SorrowsMystress Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 178I'm a wanderer, a nomad...I don't live in one particular area, Just wherever I end up. ![]() |
Thank You for Loving me (when no one else would) *For John* I guess that now it's over You'll move on, happy as ever Who am I to stop you? I have forgiven all you've said To hurt me As I hope you've forgiven The same actions I took against you... You meant a lot to me during our time together I will always have a special place In my heart, in my soul A soft spot reserved just for you While the rest of me turns to stone And while I no longer will allow myself to feel I will always feel for you... And when you find that you are in the dark That no one can understand you Or that you just can't understand yourself You will always have someone to turn to... ME.... You meant the world to me You made this desolate soul of mine Extravagant.... filled with emotion Filled with happieness Filled with compassion.... You have given me more Than those have ever done before. I will not look back on us As a mistake But as an experience I've always wanted And thankfully got to acheive. I will not look back on us As an unfortunate mishap But as a glorious time in my life The one chance I had to be happy. And if, for any strange reason You find you still love me... I will be here... And I will welcome you back Gladly But if still you discover that I am not what you want I will still be here Ready to be your friend When you need me the most Ready to understand you When no one else does All I ask Is that you don't forget me And you will look back on us Fondly.... I love you I always will And I will be here for you through your tough times and through your good times And you will forever be The one for me... The one that will always remain My true love... Thank you for the good times Thank you for showing me That life is more than just pain And dissapointment Thank you for showing me Me.... "It was my love that did us both to death. " -Sylvia Plath |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Aw, Sorrow, what a sweet sad and forlorn poem - yet with such wisdom and realization that life gives and life takes and we learn from those experiences. Well written. ~netswan |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Lovely SM, well done. ![]() Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain." I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow (unkown) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely thoughts and a very mature and unselfish attitude. This is so soft and smooth. James |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
beautiful thoughts and you show maturity and courage in your parting.....its difficult to let go of something but if there is no other way good friendship will always be there o hold dearly and you unselfish nature is too good...but still there's some hope..go for it..until you realise it's impossible..then carry on with your life. Sincerely A_L |
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