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The First Hello ... The Last Goodbye
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The First Hello ... The Last Goodbye |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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The First Hello ... The Last Goodbye ~*Marge Tindal*~ The first hello the last goodbye Breathed on the feather of a sigh ~ A sigh of remembering how sweet it's been How short the time from start to end ~ The first hello I'll remember The last goodbye I could never forget ~ The time in between the sweetest yet *Inspired to post this one for Tennessee Angel* ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge~ Very sweet my friend. Reminds us to make the most of whatever time we get inbetween that hello and good-bye. Wonderful thoughts!!  LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Marge~ excellent as your work always is. this one held a very valuable meaning in it that i take to heart. cherish each day you have...for you never know when good-bye is around the corner. and it is unfortunate, but good-bye is always inevitable in life. great message you have written here. take care. amy "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~I agree,...it is a great message. So well written...but of course  . I love this...love the reminder it gives us. Take care you. |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Wow!!!! It's not fair to pen a poem superior to the one which inspired it. Putting my injured pride aside, I absolutely loved this! It's truly an honor to have my name in any way related to it. "Good-bye" is one of the saddest words there is. "That man has shown himself great who has never grieved in evil days and never bewailed his destiny." --Seneca |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LoneWolf~ I'm glad you enjoyed the sentiment behind it. Amy~ Honey, I know you read this one with your heart. Thank you for your thoughts. SpitFire~ I'm pleased that you liked it. TennesseeAngel~ LOL ! Got a smile out of this lady ! Thank you for the inspiration. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Marge~ Wonderful poem, such a tender thought and message. Luv Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--what a lovely poem...each day and each minute should be treated as new...thanks for the reminder. |
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narima New Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 5 |
how true your words are although most of the time i find it hard to accept cos goodbye is always painful |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
to say good bye is something evryone should learn but memmories do stay with us... Sincerely A_L |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~ Hon, I thank you. And yes, you are right. Narima~ Oh, hon ... goodbye can be painful - but the time inbetween is worth remembering. AmazonLover~ Yes, it is so. Thank you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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