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Moon Dust
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0 posted 2000-06-08 06:05 PM



I think of the star,
That passed so long ago,
Shooting across the sky,
Burning bright for a second,
But in my heart,
A etenatity,
I know its gone,
But my heart doesn't.

 We are all poets, its just some people dont know it yet.

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Rosebud1229
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since 2000-04-05
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1 posted 2000-06-08 07:44 PM


Maria very nice poem, I often think of how fast time does fly. Just as a shooting star across the sky. Where does all the wishes go when we wish upon a star? Just a though! I believe they are there just hidden in our heart. Nice to meet you Maria
Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
2 posted 2000-06-08 08:32 PM


Maria
you have expressed your thoughts
quite lovely! this was clever and
quite beautiful. life passes very
quickly, always changing. but our
heart is usually the last to know.
great poem!!
amy  
p.s. i look forward to reading more
from you!


 "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

"Fate exists but it can only take you so far,
Because once you're there
It's up to you to make it happen."




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