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Eloise
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since 1999-11-27
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Wyoming

0 posted 2000-06-08 05:01 PM


I hear my name whispered from afar.
I look to the skies and follow that star.
Over the clouds someone beckons to me,
As I move like a wave out in the sea.

The galaxy lights that twinkle so bright
Lead to the path of this magical night.
I never get lost, I know the way.
It's on the far side of the milky way.

Floating like a feather against the wind
To places that I've never been.
Looking around there is so much to see,
Now that my spirit has been set free.

Taking in this silver slice of heaven
As I journey on to this far away land.
Once I am there I am greeted with glee.
This fantasyland is the place to be.


© Copyright 2000 Eloise - All Rights Reserved
Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

1 posted 2000-06-08 05:30 PM


Absolutley Lovely!  

 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)



PoetasterD
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since 2000-06-03
Posts 42
Florida
2 posted 2000-06-08 08:20 PM


Eloise,

I wish I could visit your fantasy land. It sounds like a wonderful, magical place!

Beat wishes!
Poetaster D

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2000-06-08 08:44 PM


Beam me up, Eloise~
You tell an enchanted tale.
I'm on my way !
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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SpitFire
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since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

4 posted 2000-06-08 10:30 PM


~Oh can I come???  This is so well done. Thanks for sharing it. Take care.
Eloise
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since 1999-11-27
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Wyoming
5 posted 2000-06-09 01:10 AM


Thank you for the lovely DarkAngel
PoetasterD, you can visit any time you like   Thanks.
Marge, SpitFire, thanks for the comments and yes you can all come.  We'll just have one big party!  LOL  

Alle'cram
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since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816
Texas
6 posted 2000-06-09 01:23 AM


Heavenly! So light and glorious. Serene.
Really good piece.

Eloise
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since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096
Wyoming
7 posted 2000-06-09 08:42 AM


Thank you Alle1cram.
tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
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Australia
8 posted 2000-06-09 09:06 AM


Eloise~
A beautiful journey ou took me on, I love your fantasyland  
Excellent piece
TC~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Eloise
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since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096
Wyoming
9 posted 2000-06-09 06:39 PM


Thanks tracie.  Glad you enjoyed the ride  
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