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Open Poetry #7

AA Challenge #2

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

0 posted 2000-04-20 11:54 PM

In instant ideal infusion
Now never needing nothing

You yearn yet young
Only once over obsessing
Usually under universal umber
Remembering recent revelations recurring

Even every eagle eyes
Your youth yesteryear yelling
Eventually eveyone eastern enters
Seeming smiling smoldering sunsets

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2000-04-21 12:15 PM

Thank you for the lyrics, Sven--I've just been humming along happily...

sweet and clever too. Love to you.

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

2 posted 2000-04-21 12:53 PM

thought it was an alcoholic challenge!! LOL.. Good one...

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2000-04-21 07:01 PM

Thank you serenity, the music just keeps on playing. . .

and no deVine. . .it wasn't an alcoholic challenge!! LOL.. . I just wanted to have some fun with the name!!

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

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