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Simple Satisfaction, Blue... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Oprah and some counseling Pleas and self-help books shattered phone can't call police threats and craft and God's mercy... Psychotropics shot of booze of all the choices I could choose Enraged, all option overlooked-- I developed a mean left hook. All words said and all deeds done (possible) more to come... I must confess. I do attest, of all the feelings I could have felt nothing...but remorselessness. Void regrets' absolution cold and hard and mean, but true-- simple satisfaction, blue... |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Serenity, I'm not sure I understand this piece, but it is darkly beautiful. All my love, Jeffrey |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
of all the choices I could choose Enraged, all option overlooked-- I developed a mean left hook. All words said and all deeds done (possible) more to come... I must confess. I do attest, of all the feelings I could have felt nothing...but remorselessness. ------------ simple satisfaction, blue... jeffery... sometimes ya gotta read between the lines... serenity... sweets, its along walk from where I am to where you are... but I think I could walk on my lips to get there... just to hug ya(smile) powerful poem my poetice twin...makes my heart hurt...but I know we feel better when we write it all out... take care, my serenity-girl, please jm Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders And it makes me want to touch you there. And the light in your eyes makes me feel Like there's something much better out there Something kind... And I know someday I might be looking around Trying to find some purpose Well purpose it can't be that hard to find As long as I've got the wind... The wind and your love to carry me. vertical horizon |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
OK I get it now... I'm having a blonde moment I guess...lol All my love, Jeffrey |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Janet Marie--if you can walk on your lips-- ah, you should write about it... I'd buy a ticket just to read the replies... Kisses to ya, (after you wipe those lips) Much love,m'twin. Jeffrey------how sweet can you be? Thanx, dawlin'...much appreciation. |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
very good and powerful poem makes me glad that my my life is a little bit ho hum ... hum drum  Rex}>{{{{o> |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Rex Allen--you don't need this kind of excitement, luvie-- And to you all---I don't really like to explain so much--but I felt I should at least write a 'disclaimer' on this: Not an incident that happened recently (mmm..2 yrs. ago, maybe...) I just FELT like decking him last night--wrote this poem instead. But the point is, how abuse transforms the abused into abuser...how it hardens and inures them psychologically and even physically to love...and leaves them without capability of remorse...This poem is a result of the child abuse theme of late... a theme I find extremely difficult--couldn't fathom--can't relate--except on this personal level...So worry not...Serenity is indeed serene...(But I DO have a mean left hook...) I send you love. Go spread it around. |
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