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Today has Died
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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Today has died As golden rays fade twilight whispers memories of precious love made frolicking above the horizon I see us through the cloud of my cigarette where you and I once were alive to each ones touch feelings and needs where tomorrow didn't arrive and today was today and not over where thoughts are now ridiculous and are of no worth or value but this is tomorrow and not yesterday today has died Dark Angel 8/6/00 As the Quotation says..... This Angel.... will love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain." I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow (unkown) [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 06-07-2000).] |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Such vivid sadness.....I turned and almost could smell the smoke.. good one!  |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
WOW! this was intense and very emotionally powerful. i liked the theme even if it was a sad one. but just remember...even though today may have died, there is ALWAYS a tomorrow. take care m'friend. amy  "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
As always, I loved reading this one!! It was not so much sad as bittersweet. I think that you have to hold on today only as long as is possible and then reach out for tomorrow. There will always be a tomorrow, and there will always be a yesterday, but todays are oh so fleeting. Great Work, once again! "That man has shown himself great who has never grieved in evil days and never bewailed his destiny." --Seneca |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Sharon, Aimster and TA, thanks so much for your lovely and sweet replies, I do appreciate them so. Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain." I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow (unkown) |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DarkAngel~ WOW ! This is simply lovely ! So emotionally moving. I loved the format ! Very creative, my dear. Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Girl, I don't know what it is in your sadness that brings about such exquisite poetry, but it does. frolicking above the horizon I see us through the cloud of my cigarette Love the word usage here! |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Dark Angel,...thank you for sharing this part of you. Truly a sad yet wonderfully written and displayed piece of poetry. Take care. *Peace. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Thanks Marge, glad you liked it! Angel thanks so much girrrl *Ribbit*Sppitfire, you are welcome, thanks for your lovely reply. Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain." I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow (unkown) |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Your memories may be bitter ones, but I see a possitive look for tomorrow...well done, Dark Angel. |
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