the fever of love - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Open Poetry #7

the fever of love

stephen t johnson
New Member

since 2000-06-06

Posts 6

0 posted 2000-06-07 08:41 PM

wen i saw her,
he ws like a gentle wind,
clearing my head of all thoughts,
breaking my concentration,
letting me flow free werever i want to be

my knees went blank,
hitting the floor,letting my heart indulge in the effortless gaze i had casted upon her.

i had the fever of love,
burning my heart,
clearing myself of all thoughts,
lettng my heart burn,
wth the fever of love

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

1 posted 2000-06-07 08:45 PM

very nice love does make you feel like you have a high fever.nice to meet you

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2000-06-09 05:40 AM

"When I saw her she was like a gentle wind,
clearing my head of all thoughts, breaking my concentration, letting me flow free wherever I want to be." Stephen this is lovely...wonderful flow and thoughts. Reminds me of the first day I met my friend Laura...I felt almost exactly the same thoughts. James

netswan
Senior Member

since 2000-03-28

Posts 1369
Washington

3 posted 2000-06-09 06:02 AM

Ah love at first sight --)
sweet poem

~netswan

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.