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Seeing you now |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
Still i cry seeing what you have become without me Deep in me I am jealous Of the sheets holding you in nights who are you now where is the one my soulmate who is to love How did we lose so deep a well of love of truth in our space What can I do to try to return To who we were Can it really be dead I still see you When i close my eyes when i listen to the voice of the wind All we created in those long night of passion of realization is now shattered and gone Am i lost in this pit can't a hold on to just a little bit "Mother is the word for god on the hearts and lips of children everywhere" Brandon Lee THE CROW |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very nice work. I think you have captured the lonliness very well. I enjoyed the read. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
W.P.* You've put tears of understanding in my eyes with this....you have captured heart breaking pain with this piece. Still i cry seeing what you have become without me I still see you When i close my eyes when i listen to the voice of the wind These especially echo my voice, I'm sorry that you too have felt this pain....there is a rainbow somewhere...we just have to find it! Thank you for sharing this. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Still i cry seeing what you have become without me Deep in me I am jealous Of the sheets holding you in nights ------------- I still see you When i close my eyes when i listen to the voice of the wind All we created in those long night of passion of realization is now shattered and gone Am i lost in this pit can't a hold on to just a little bit ----------- painfully beautiful walter.. letting go is always the hardest lesson of love we learn... letting go without regret is the key to setting our hearts free.. but the hardest lesson to learn tender aching poem my friend take care, jm I think I could need - this in my life I think I'm just scared - that I know too much I can't relate and that's a problem I'm feeling ... If you're gone - maybe it's time to go home There's an awful lot of breathing room But I can hardly move If you're gone - baby you need to come home cuz there's a little bit of something me... In everything in you. ~MB20~ "What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" ~Lao Tze Tao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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