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eyesplus2
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since 2000-03-02
Posts 163
australia

0 posted 2000-06-07 02:53 AM


What is Love.....
The Question is asked.......

The answer is different for everyone........

A Lifetime together......
Gives Love its meaning for two becoming one

For others.......
A Lifetime apart.....
Is what it screams to them

For you and I......
The look of your eyes as you say.....

I do........forevermore

What is Love
The question is asked.......We write the answer on each other's  heart.........



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netswan
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since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369
Washington
1 posted 2000-06-07 03:52 AM


How Sweet, Eyes plus 2

~netswan

Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
2 posted 2000-06-07 06:12 AM


"What is Love
The question is asked.......We write the answer on each other's  heart........."

Oh I loved your final line here Eyes ... well done!

Best wishes,
/Kit

ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
3 posted 2000-06-07 06:33 AM


That's the way it should be. Very nice poem.
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