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For You I Do It All
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For You I Do It All |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678
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For You I Do It All ~First Knight~ Oh the passion that you bring, With just the sight of you. Eats me up inside, I don't know what to do. I close the space between us, Now my heart begins to race. You're pressed against the wall, With passion on your face. My weight to pin you down, Pressure upon your breasts. Breathing growing stronger, I am going to be your best. Sliding down the wall now, My lips locked with yours. Moans growing louder, As we lay upon the floor. Kisses down your neck, A hand down deep inside. Movement with fluid motion, Deeper you confide. Hands give way to mouth, Wetness with desire. Warm and tender love, My tongue will never tire. Rocking back and forth, Teasing as I go. Kisses getting deeper, Juices mix and flow. I want to hear my name, Upon your precious lips. Pleasure with release, As you move your hips. I' ll never stop this act, My name I hear you call. Your body, soul and heart, For you I do it all. It takes only a minute to get a crush on someone, an hour to like someone, a day to love someone, but it takes a lifetime to forget someone. |
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PanDol Senior Member
since 2000-03-11
Posts 1245USA |
Man Alive! This is very sensual First_Knight, and very loving as well!  This one gets my applause! *ClapClapClap* Excellent piece! ~PanDol~ |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Whoa First Knight ------ ------------it's hot in here  |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Excellent First_Knight! Wow! Back to the cold shower I go! Best wishes, /Kit |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Thank you all....I am glad you enjoyed it It takes only a minute to get a crush on someone, an hour to like someone, a day to love someone, but it takes a lifetime to forget someone. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Whew...I think this one calls for a cold shower indeed. Is it hot in here or is it just me? Darn hot flashes anyway Nice poem David |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
oops thats was toooo good a poem . keep 'em coming. I feel like.. A_L |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
FN~ lord boy you better hand me a hose lol. its very umm warm in here. this was most sensual and right down sexy! whatever inspired you to write this or whoever, keep them coming. wowsers! take care, amy "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
First_Night, WOW!! HOT AND SEXY!!!! Where did you guys put that hose?? LOL....I need it!!!! Great writing...very erotic. LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
 Sigh Very intense I must say liked it Coco [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 06-08-2000).] |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
This is so passionate, feels like I am there..whew(sweat dripping) sure makes me melt... |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
As this had gathered little response while being posted for a while I assumed it was a dead horse.........LOL Thank you all for reading It takes only a minute to get a crush on someone, an hour to like someone, a day to love someone, but it takes a lifetime to forget someone. |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
How did I miss this one? Bravo Sir! Regards, Eric. |
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Lorraine Nisbet Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 218Jersey City, NJ USA |
First_Knight~ Where the heck is that hose when you need it? ~Lorraine A great poet is nothing more....than a discovered amateur |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Well I certainly don't need the heater anymore, this your poem alone warmed me right up. WOW! very nice David. Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain." I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow (unkown) |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
You've set that biological function on fire with those leaping flames of passion. |
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lorilockheart Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 206Alabama |
First Knight, Wow!!! Sexy, wild, and hot. Enjoyed it! Lori ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance. song by LeeAnn Womack ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Wow the response to this has been great.....This may be my most successful poem yet and I really didn't think it would gather much of a response. THank you all It takes only a minute to get a crush on someone, an hour to like someone, a day to love someone, but it takes a lifetime to forget someone. |
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